nation

Member since 2002 · Posted 5 Apr 2002 · 4 comments

we are a nation on. our knees i stand spread open i am ready to be crucified nail me to your cross splintered trailer park boards because in god we trust standing on the lee ward side father, friend, foe, driving each nail in my blood runs tracks like tears across my face my finger with not push you death (unwilling) i have died a nation has fainted.

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[4] nrevatehtni 10-Apr-02/8:35 AM Reply

what are you talking about?

[5] nentwined 10-May-02/9:33 AM Reply

except for the top three lines, this reads backwards very nicely (perhaps better)?

all in all, though, I don't get it.

[1] Holden 22-Jul-02/1:29 PM Reply

Weird ??

[3] Frass 31-Jul-02/5:23 PM Reply

Spasms of creativity; get it together, roses.