Afraid Of You (To Amber)

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Aug 2002 · 3 comments

Sometimes I'm afraid of you... The things you'll do... The things you'd say... If you knew how I feel... They are so strong... My feelings for you... My feelings are true.... Yet I want them to go away... We're different people... Different ways... Different lives... These things keep my from confessin'... I don't wanna like you... Stay away... But stay near... I need you with me... Stay my friend... Nothing more... Nothing less... Don't leave me alone... I may be afraid... Of loving you.... Of being with you... But I'm more afraid of loosing you...

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[0] deleted user 15-Aug-02/12:53 AM Reply

This is just not very good. I wish I had some suggestions to make it better, but I cannot think of one.

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 15-Aug-02/4:57 AM Reply

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[0] poetandknowit 15-Aug-02/7:58 AM Reply

I have never seen such misuse of the ellipsoidal in my life. It is rampant on this site. Who is teaching you people. But in this case it was good because I faded out in the first sentence and didn't have to read the journal entry that followed. Think before you write.