Vodka kisses & the final sigh, v.II (bloody vodka remix)

Member since 2003 · Posted 6 Mar 2004 · Edited 8 May 2004 · 4 comments

Scarlet burnt sky & vodka kisses goodbye; really was nice talkin 'n smokin, till our last weary mumbles & the final sigh. Fatigue our bodies can not try to deny; it's bitter 'n grim, just like sin served stiff, with vodka kisses goodbye. Our glasses are full, yet lips remain dry-- This bleedin red sky keeps burnin till our last mumbles, & final jaded sigh. Time passes, our cigars burn & slowly die; cool blue smoke starts witherin-- our hip mood swiftly vodka kiss'd goodbye. Rosy-red brow saggin, smiling, mad & sly. Killed the last warm shot of gin, before our weary mumbling & the final sigh. Rubbin my sore-achin 'n crusted left eye, as my ole belly starts a-blazin from devil sky & stiff vodka kiss goodbye-- bloody mary stirrin my last wry & tired sigh.

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4 comments

[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 8-May-04/10:24 AM Reply

Wipe that stupid smile off your bum-like face, hand your badge back to the commissioner, get the hell out of my office, and for Christ's sake put some clothes on :( -10-

[n/a] Don-Quixote › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 8-May-04/12:25 PM Reply

Whatever.

[10] INTRANSIT 8-May-04/1:13 PM Reply

Better beat, verbage. Quite.

[6] Jill Stockinger 2-Jan-21/6:46 PM Reply

cannot (one word) unless you think it is more "poetic" to keep them separated- I really do not think it is, I believe it just detracts from the flow.
bleedin' red...witherin'-saggin'-stirrin' ...