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Free verse № 93746

The Cessation of Fidelity

Member since 2004 · Posted 8 Mar 2004 · 9 comments

Shivering in the dark like the moss under a stone, I genuflect beneath the languid stars. From this ever expanding chasm, there appears no escape. But I've dug this hole myself and here I will lie eternally. I offer no apologies, for that would be in vain. I will face the jury, and welcome the waves with open arms. There is no remorse for my malefaction in my blackened, bitter heart. Only sorrow for what I've lost.

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9 comments

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9-Mar-04/8:01 AM Reply
guff
[9] BrandonW 9-Mar-04/11:30 AM Reply
Oh, how we can all say the same thing in so many ways - been there - love it!
[10] fuzzylogicisatwat 9-Mar-04/12:42 PM Reply
This poem, as a handbag half full of sick, should be politely discarded.
[n/a] wilco › fuzzylogicisatwat 9-Mar-04/12:50 PM Reply
Then why did you give it a 10?
[n/a] Stephen Robins › wilco 2-Jun-04/7:34 AM Reply
I splipped whilst wiping the spunk of my mouse.
[8] zodiac 9-Mar-04/1:47 PM Reply
Do you think _Evanescence_ is the best band ever?
[n/a] wilco › zodiac 9-Mar-04/1:48 PM Reply
Who?
[8] zodiac › wilco 9-Mar-04/1:55 PM Reply
[n/a] wilco › zodiac 9-Mar-04/2:03 PM Reply
Are they good? They look kind of like morticians...