poemranker ::I think of you by singinkygal

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Free verse № 94280

I think of you

by singinkygal

Member since 2003 · Posted 15 Mar 2004 · 3 comments

What do I do when I want to smile but all I can do is cry I think of you What do I do when I'm alone for a while and I miss you so much I could die I think of you What do I do when I know that you are miles away and I would give anything just to hold you I think of you What do I do when I have doubt and can't say anything to make it go away I remember that there is you and then I think of us

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[7] zodiac 15-Mar-04/4:59 PM Reply
I read your username as Sin-Gin-KY[Jelly]-Gal. I would strongly recommend rewriting this poem with one of those images/topics as a central figure - a leitmotif, if you will. By the way, leitmotif is your word for the day. Have a nice one. -7-
[7] deleted user 16-Mar-04/10:40 AM Reply
A nice heartfelt piece. I enjoyed the opening line especially.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 16-Mar-04/2:06 PM Reply
Great use of 'die' to rhyme with 'cry'!!!!!1111 -10-