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Ramblings of Senility

by Lifeboatman

Member since 2003 · Posted 22 Mar 2004 · 4 comments

I wish that there can exist Between your world and my backyard An understanding that will not Be tempted to address its miseries In a hollow dome of a well Beckon then, sweetest of adversaries, And incant your words to manifest Truth's most abominable face Or discontent yourself at the sight Of a pariah heralding our inevitable Pizza delivery

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[9] Shuushin 22-Mar-04/7:25 PM Reply
Nicely constructed, nicely done.
[n/a] Lifeboatman › Shuushin 22-Mar-04/7:43 PM Reply
thanks...
[10] versus_u 24-Mar-04/12:05 AM Reply
when im 80, ill prolly sit by the beach on mornings and feast myself with the sight of sultry lifeboatmen.. ;) hey man, missed you!
[n/a] Lifeboatman › versus_u 23-May-04/2:49 AM Reply
How come I see you here.. been a while...