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Haiku № 972

Loneliness

by Cha no Onna

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Apr 2002 · 6 comments

Skytears bleed from the Flowers and jeweled fishnet Beyond prison glass

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[6] nentwined 13-Apr-02/12:57 AM Reply
I think this has too many different images glommed into one for me, too much going on. rain == sky tears == sky is crying... tears are bleeding... so rain is rolling off the flowers... jeweled fishnet? a spider's web? outside the window. I think with all the extras tossed in, the meaning is less powerful.
[n/a] Cha no Onna › nentwined 8-Oct-02/5:11 PM Reply
I wrote this poem 12 years ago when I was 15. Yeah, it needs work.
[3] -=SeTTle=- 11-May-02/10:38 PM Reply
Look at me, I'm a vampyre: FLAP FLAP FLAP FLAP
[n/a] Cha no Onna › -=SeTTle=- 8-Oct-02/5:12 PM Reply
You're cute!
[7] anonymous 19-May-02/12:37 AM Reply
the picture isn't a clear to me as the words are vivid.

Rain??

half-beautiful, disappearing....
[6] Amelia 11-Sep-02/1:12 PM Reply
Hmmm...