poemranker ::Words that the Earth has to say… by nothingtoanyone

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Free verse № 98470

Words that the Earth has to say…

Member since 2003 · Posted 23 Apr 2004 · 4 comments

I live on and on imprinted into the surroundings. My mark will go unseen and unnoticed by all. They use me and abuse me. Trash and thrash me day after day. I wait for the day that they will see with open eyes. Eyes that will see its to late, to late to save what’s left of the world. Eyes that will cry tears, tears that fall do to plain and simple stupidity.

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 24-Apr-04/5:06 AM Reply
I bet you wish you were an elf. Yeah, that would be so cool, wouldn't it, to be an elf? But what if everyone else was an elf too? No, that wouldn't be as good. God, you're pathetic.
[5] halofriendly 24-Apr-04/5:56 AM Reply
"too late, too late"....
[5] edpeterson 24-Apr-04/6:14 AM Reply
last line is perfect...do to plain and simple stupidity....Genius! Unfortunately, the rest of it is endlessly unbearable drivel, and it is only 9 lines long. Well...Here goes the spin...5
[7] Shuushin 24-Apr-04/10:12 AM Reply
"to[o] late"