poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Eagledale Drive by klosterfobik.

nentwined27 Aug 2004

very evocative, though I find I want to know more how you were lost. Is it just the time?

I like the line "Can you believe the gray wind of used to be and winter?"

"simple perfect" -> "simple perfection"? Or are you making a grammatical pun of some sort that I'm failing to get?