-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.4 Jun 2003

whatever you do, i'd leave in the "hand grasps the penis" bit and the banging and banging and bonking and bonking and banging and bonking and banging and banging and banging and baaaaaaarrrgghhh!!!

Actually that's not a bad idea. You might want to throw in an "AAAAAAAAAARRGGHHHH!" somewhere. Instead of CUM.