-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.13 Aug 2002

Yes. Yes...it's all falling into place. I think this poeme is quite good. However, no matter how many times I read it I still think it says 'break wind'. If it had been 'break wind', I probably would have fallen over and hurt myself in my delight. Just imagine...a fine afternoon, a date with one's best girl to break wind, and then she spoils it by telling you her troubles before the festivities can begin. The cheek!