poemranker ::Sansho-shima by spoink

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Haiku № 2077

Sansho-shima

by spoink

Member since 2002 · Posted 17 May 2002 · Edited 17 May 2002 · 2 comments

Even when she called to break up with me, first she told me her troubles.

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[3] hoopoe 19-May-02/6:45 AM Reply
what's the title mean???
you seem better off without her. Get out more
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 13-Aug-02/5:56 AM Reply
Yes. Yes...it's all falling into place. I think this poeme is quite good. However, no matter how many times I read it I still think it says 'break wind'. If it had been 'break wind', I probably would have fallen over and hurt myself in my delight. Just imagine...a fine afternoon, a date with one's best girl to break wind, and then she spoils it by telling you her troubles before the festivities can begin. The cheek!