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Fraser Allonby Q.C.22 Apr 2004

This is the best poem I have read for ages. Is this a collaborative effort? It's absolutely superb.

I admire the economy of language. SupremeDreamer should take note.

He travails;
His anfractuous metacarpals impinge upon the alluvium,
His cauterized and atramentous integument is begrimed with feculence:
He's besmirched.

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