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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.225 |
13-May-04/5:07 PM |
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Would it be wrong if two Christians accidentally had sex before marriage? For instance, suppose the woman is lying nude on her bed, alone, and praying, and the man is in a room directly above, nude, lying face down on the floor with a harness around him and a bungee attached to his back. And then the floor boards give way and the man falls onto the woman repeatedly (because of the bungee) and the woman can't move because she is in the middle of a prayer and hasn't said "Amen" yet. Moreover, whilst the incident is totally out of their control, they still obtain sexual pleasure from the encounter because they can't help their natural instincts. Would that be wrong? Hmm?
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| Re: Swan on Willow Lake by Caducus |
<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.130.62.63 |
13-May-04/5:18 PM |
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Crow In a Stagnant Pond by Frivilous Mediocrity
Oh crow in the mire!
Why won't you float nigger
Oh Black bird in quick sand
If you weren't so black
I'd lend a hand.
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| Re: Who are the best poets on poemranker? (A list by me) by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.130.62.63 |
13-May-04/5:22 PM |
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Actually Sliffer, everything after the top 10 don't 'really' matter.
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Sasha 69.138.236.63 |
13-May-04/5:46 PM |
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actually I think I'll voat
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Sasha 69.138.236.63 |
13-May-04/5:46 PM |
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Here's a 5 as a gift from me to you
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| Re: Domingos by candaliesa |
Sasha 69.138.236.63 |
13-May-04/6:18 PM |
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AABB rhyme schemes hurt me and cause my forehead to slam the desk in siezure.
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| Re: A Year Later (edited a bit) by Sasha |
sliver 63.190.73.71 |
13-May-04/6:20 PM |
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On this fine May day, I read this as it snows outside my window.These are the people I seek to find, When I pass I won't leave them behind.
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| Re: Random by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
sliver 63.190.73.71 |
13-May-04/6:24 PM |
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Were you under orders? Huh were ya?
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| Re: Domingos by candaliesa |
sliver 63.190.73.71 |
13-May-04/6:34 PM |
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My poem 'All There' was written for my father on his birthday, also the 1 year anniversary of his death. I can feel your pain, well expressed.
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Sasha 69.138.236.63 |
13-May-04/6:37 PM |
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Have I heard this before? Or parts of it?
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sliver 63.190.73.71 |
13-May-04/6:42 PM |
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I like the wet sock on the line analogy-hell I loved the whole first stanza, alot. The rest was o.k., but it didn't keep the grip that the first stanza had. Overall 8, but a good one. I visit my grandma in Douds Iowa, so I can relate to the humidity, the pit, etc.
Talk about cooling off in a creek on the way home . Perhaps another find? (Indian artifacts, etc.)
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| Re: A Year Later (edited a bit) by Sasha |
INTRANSIT 152.163.252.165 |
13-May-04/6:49 PM |
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Maryland? So close to the capital, too.
My condolences.
Quality vill though.
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| Re: goofy poem to prove I'm not morbid (Ode to an Onion) by greym0on |
Sasha 69.138.236.63 |
13-May-04/6:49 PM |
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Sasha 69.138.236.63 |
13-May-04/6:53 PM |
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Okay okay. Since sliver will no doubt shove an iron rod up my rectum unless I comment on this one with a vote:
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because it makes me feel drunk..
Incidentally, I drink to make other people more interesting
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| Re: Random by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
INTRANSIT 152.163.252.165 |
13-May-04/7:01 PM |
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For accuracy, 10. For myself,0
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| Re: Random by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
Sasha 69.138.236.63 |
13-May-04/7:15 PM |
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| Re: Tomorrow by Quarton |
Sasha 69.138.236.63 |
13-May-04/7:57 PM |
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The fog is a veil to hide our kisses....etc.
Gag me
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| Re: us by tatteredatlas |
sliver 63.190.73.71 |
13-May-04/8:08 PM |
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| Re: Speaking Dog by MacFrantic |
sliver 63.190.73.71 |
13-May-04/8:10 PM |
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I feel your pain. If I ask my dog what's on a house,
She says a rooooof> she can talk too
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| Re: an ode to hypatia by francis nor capule |
sliver 63.190.73.71 |
13-May-04/8:12 PM |
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