Re: love.term by ggawrysi	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	7-May-04/4:08 PM
I find "Programming" a distraction here. This story-poem could be told better, directly in free verse or something.
Re: Moon In My Blood by AtalantaPendragonne	capachijim 24.168.25.13	7-May-04/5:59 PM
beautiful
Re: Playa been caught in their games. (revised/new) by LuckyJoe	capachijim 24.168.25.13	7-May-04/6:01 PM
very expressive and real, for once in poemranker history
Re: love.term by ggawrysi	capachijim 24.168.25.13	7-May-04/6:08 PM
yay! I love programming poems!
Re: nothingtoanyone by Everyone	nothingtoanyone 63.183.241.70	7-May-04/4:14 PM
Didn't know that you wrote one about me before I wrote one about you...hehe...Even though I don't think its spost to be nice:( I still am happy:)
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	7-May-04/8:58 PM
I post this in celebration of my 100th Poemranker Poem. Thank you for putting up with my various ramblings.
Re: The follies befalling an unfledged street poet. by SupremeDreamer	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215	8-May-04/3:32 AM
Along with horus8, you seem to delight in the notion that you're constantly leaping forward poetically and spiritually, unaware that you've merely enrolled in yet another new school of guff. -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215	8-May-04/3:37 AM
"We can’t be everyplace at once spinning satellites and planets like plates on poles - yet some try." O how true.
Re: sunrise at kofa by unknown^user	zodiac 67.240.155.25	8-May-04/3:43 AM
"if the hills sing and the valleys mourn" seems to me to have no meaning whatsoever. What do you think?
Re: The follies befalling an unfledged street poet. by SupremeDreamer	zodiac 67.240.192.59	8-May-04/5:20 AM
I graduate from Poetry School with my Master's in Poetry today. This is a general announcement and has nothing to do with this poem, which I find is almost unreadable and totally, unsurprisingly about SupremeDreamer. -10-
Re: Funeral of My Childhood by Spindle	SupremeDreamer 204.31.164.173	8-May-04/5:27 AM
Your poem is young and fledgling, but you show some promise- just expand your topic/style/view of life around you when wielding the pen. Blessed with seven.
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 204.31.164.173	8-May-04/5:29 AM
Well crafted, swagger, I really enjoyed it over-all, & I don't see anything I'd change or suggest snipping. Blessed with eight.
Re: Where Have All the Punk Rockers Gone? by wilco	SupremeDreamer 204.31.164.173	8-May-04/5:33 AM
Yep, it's savvy kewl & gets m'juices sizzlin. Blessed with nine.
Re: The Towel Head Blues by horus8	SupremeDreamer 204.31.164.173	8-May-04/5:56 AM
-Nod-, Tell it like it is, ole pal. American military control in Iraq is tyrannical, Uncle Sam puppeteers the oil from Baghdad, sandniggers revolt with jihad-- oh, don't forget, now I pay two dollars & eighty cents a gallon, price soon to rise up to three bucks a gal. It's fuckin bullshit, this regimented, puritan cultured country of rednecks with blind & senseless faith; scattered groups of rebels, 'n grotesque individuals socially scorned by the majority of american folk-- a.k.a: Propoganda slaves. Blessed with ten.
Re: American Idle by wilco	SupremeDreamer 204.31.164.173	8-May-04/5:59 AM
Change: "only how to steal break my heart." To: "only how to steal & break my heart." Other than that, its fuckin groovy and sparks my fire- Blessed with ten. Good work.
Re: California triolets by zodiac	SupremeDreamer 204.31.163.23	8-May-04/6:06 AM
Well crafted, and was a pleasure to read. Blessed with ten.
Re: sunrise at kofa by unknown^user	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	8-May-04/9:34 AM
This sounds melodic, but when I try to understand it, I come up with very little. I think it needs more than melody.
Re: Little Bit of Life by alverland theme park	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	8-May-04/9:40 AM
Nice sentiment. I'd leave out the sugar and spice. And this kind of close feely poem is better for a person than it is for an audiance. If I were the person, I'd give a 10.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	8-May-04/9:51 AM
You said to me once that much of poetry is about how we feel rather than how we understand. This certainly has to be an embodiment of that principle, since most of it I could pick apart logically, or probably worse, try to explain its significance. Instead, I'll just try to feel it and say that most of it feels pretty good. "What will lifted his legs" - scratch the "will"
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	8-May-04/9:58 AM
A take-off on the poem and the picture where Jesus carried someone in time of trouble. Funny.