Re: Natural Remedy by richa	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.70	3-May-04/5:47 PM
"grow tall and tall..." maybe. It's a Whitman thing. I dunno. I like it as is. I tend to overlook burned leaves if the root is strong.
regarding some deleted poem...	<~> 64.252.164.251	3-May-04/8:56 PM
it looks like you are. i like more what you don't say, which is not to say that the fire ain't been hit with a catalyst by what you've sparked in these bytes.
Re: Come off with me Carly back into the city by zodiac	<~> 64.252.164.251	3-May-04/9:01 PM
i like this. i like the cadence and the melancholy and the present that won't escape the past, here. and the gold, the yellow, everywhere, now, bursting.
regarding some deleted poem...	nentwined 66.92.183.34	3-May-04/10:33 PM
I don't quite like plasmic. But. Very well done. Especially the wrap-up.
regarding some deleted poem...	Nicholas Jones 137.44.1.30	4-May-04/2:14 AM
This is really pretty bad. Graphic descriptions of intercourse, unless done brilliantly, are invariably unpleasant.
Re: Samurai by SupremeDreamer	Nicholas Jones 137.44.1.30	4-May-04/2:22 AM
Have you been watching Kill Bill? This is delightfully absurd in the same manner.
regarding some deleted poem...	cleverdevice 212.219.142.161	4-May-04/2:53 AM
You know, Settle is the spitting image of a guy I knew at school, called Richard Hoffman. He too walked around looking stunned with a pathetic little teenage 'tache too!
regarding some deleted poem...	Sasha 69.138.236.63	4-May-04/3:50 AM
The motif of this poem is extremely gripping, good, and of course original. What's the village supposed to represent?
Re: sad bastard by FreeFormFixation	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	4-May-04/4:18 AM
Electro-Sausage.
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 204.31.169.89	4-May-04/5:07 AM
Didn't really get my juices flowin, but its worth about an eight over-all. Sup with you lately my ole friend?
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.70	4-May-04/5:30 AM
Not to mention the Gods' wife factor.
Re: tribute by francis nor capule	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	4-May-04/5:41 AM
You appear to fail for failure's sake.
regarding some deleted poem...	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	4-May-04/5:44 AM
An enjoyable romp around the lobby of failure.
regarding some deleted poem...	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	4-May-04/5:46 AM
A double-barrelled epic of failure.
Re: The Influence of Anxiety by Nicholas Jones	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.70	4-May-04/6:52 AM
I'll get back to you. In a hunnert or so years. Poem or not, it is a vehicle to get from your last writ to your next. Most important. Bloomsday? Hmmmm..
Re: Gothic by zodiac	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.70	4-May-04/7:11 AM
I disagree. There is a poem in there. What you need is a well trained Ferret. As you know, I am not said Ferret. Put it back in the english wheel.
Re: Natural Remedy by richa	Shuushin 147.154.235.52	4-May-04/7:33 AM
Aye - cleaner. questioning "in some" now... don't hit me...
Re: -=Dark_Angel=_ fucks his mum With Stephan Robbins' face by <{Baba^Yaga}>	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	4-May-04/7:34 AM
You are a hopeless fuck.
Re: tribute by francis nor capule	Shuushin 147.154.235.52	4-May-04/7:37 AM
Is a good question(s), to be sure. And raises still more (nothing wrong with that). I think you might be limiting the poem's impact by making that last suggestion, somehow?
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	4-May-04/9:24 AM
Well, I hate to douse all this enthusiasm, but I just don't get it. An envigorating image here and there, yes, but the overall poem, no. Maybe it's seeing God as poet, but "wretched"? Sorry, I usually relate to yours.