regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 152.18.33.194	15-Mar-04/9:36 AM
Word of the Day (a haiku) | Cunnilingus. n. Licking and/or orally Stimulating snatch; | Works wonders on Christian girls.
Re: Your silhouette still drinks at my table by Don-Quixote	richa 81.178.207.247	14-Mar-04/6:13 AM
Don't know much about ghazals, think there is something about repetition you may have missed though. This is good, I have a small problem with 'didn't need to unlock these chains' which sounds a bit corny and 'vengeance passivity' which sounds babble.
Re: Repression by alverland theme park	zodiac 67.240.192.39	14-Mar-04/6:21 AM
"Let the alcohol wash this all" reminds me of my parents who always used to ask me if I was 'doing the drugs' or 'high on the dope', etc. Dear mom and dad: I was.
Re: dear jim d. by peaceseeker	mindsigns 64.12.116.207	14-Mar-04/8:47 AM
Too many quotation marks, me head hurts
Re: My Stigmata: "Psychotica" by SupremeDreamer	mindsigns 64.12.116.207	14-Mar-04/8:55 AM
i think i need to study this more, there's alot there
Re: what i see with strings by New Life Drug	mindsigns 64.12.116.207	14-Mar-04/9:01 AM
It feels more like a run-on sentence than a poem, the images are too random=..some connect and some I just don't know...
Re: Neurons by Fear of Garbage	zodiac 152.18.33.194	15-Mar-04/9:43 AM
Welcome back.
Re: Blinking by zodiac	INTRANSIT 152.163.252.72	14-Mar-04/1:16 PM
what is the point here?
Re: Blinking by zodiac	some deleted user 68.66.197.171	14-Mar-04/1:57 PM
I must agree. The poem is good until the end. I don't object on principle, just don't see how the ending goes with the rest.
Re: Blinking by zodiac	INTRANSIT 152.163.252.72	14-Mar-04/1:59 PM
ready sounds better. I still get fearlessness.
Re: Lullaby by Goad	INTRANSIT 152.163.252.72	14-Mar-04/2:25 PM
as the last to comment, I missed the tweaks and read at least three times before I had anything to say. obviously, I still don't. filling in the blank -9-.
Re: dear jim d. by peaceseeker	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.86.113.159	14-Mar-04/2:50 PM
MEDIOCRITY CODE: 2444A905 http://www.mycgiserver.com/~prawne/code.jsp?action=decode&thecode=2444A905 MEDIOCRITY SCORE: -10-
Re: My Boyfriend's Afro Pick by horus8	INTRANSIT 152.163.252.72	14-Mar-04/3:10 PM
Just how much Ginsberg have you read?
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 152.30.23.24	14-Mar-04/4:03 PM
"For her [Blake's Thel], the world of sexual generation is a couch of death rather than a bank of bliss because her eye cannot be opened to the fact that eternity is in love with the productions of time... "Thel" is the "woman" as the reviewers defined her, who tacitly accepts their predications of her womanhood, becomes blinkered to her visionary role, and sees sex as death. Oothoon is the woman intuitively aware of her emanative function as life’s prerequisite in time, as she is the woman also aware of the masochistic male prerogative which keeps her from fulfilling it by effectively equating life and love with death and sin." - Murray, E.B. "Thel, Thelyphthora, and the Daughters of Albion." (quoted in zodiac's forthcoming publication, _Blake Criticism: A Whiffle Bat Endlessly & Ungently Applied to My Tender Head_)
regarding some deleted poem...	BrandonW 172.166.140.98	14-Mar-04/5:33 PM
"Still a little bit of your taste in my mouth Still a little bit of you laced with my doubt Still a little hard to say what's going on Still a little bit of your ghost your witness Still a little piece of your face I haven't kissed You step a little closer to me Still I can't see what's going on Stones taught me to fly Love taught me to lie Life taught me to die So it's not hard to fall When you float like a cannonball Still a little bit of your song in my ear Still a little bit of your words I long to hear You step a little closer each day So close that I can't see what's going on Stones taught me to fly Love taught me to lie Life taught me to die So it's not hard to fall When you float like a cannon Stones taught me to fly Love taught me to cry So come on courage! Teach me to be shy 'Cause it's not hard to fall And I don't want to scare her It's not hard to fall And I don't wanna lose It's not hard to grow When you know that you just don't know" Damien Rice - Cannonball great album I might add!
Re: I Wish by tori	some deleted user 68.66.197.171	14-Mar-04/6:20 PM
I've been there. Why do we need to write in a hazy, over-nostalgic, gushing way to say what can be said as easily and straightforwardly as you have said it.
Re: A brief history in destruction by mindsigns	some deleted user 68.66.197.171	14-Mar-04/6:32 PM
I hate these morbid poems, and love the way you've written this one. It's the way of poets to write this stuff. Wish we could all escape.
Re: The Politics of Poetry.coms by <{Baba^Yaga}>	zodiac 67.240.211.41	14-Mar-04/7:40 PM
Why do you spend all your time running around with those floozies? Do they prepare nutritious meals for you? Do they hand-wash your breeches? Or twirl your hair while you sleep? Or highlight all your favorite shows in the TV Guide? Come back to us, horus. The kids miss their father.
Re: Blinking by zodiac	annabellee 64.252.110.134	14-Mar-04/8:00 PM
You could surprise me and you did.
regarding some deleted poem...	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.86.113.159	15-Mar-04/8:13 AM
You really badly wish you were a medieval princess.