regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 24.222.81.233	15-Mar-04/1:05 PM
I'm a dead dung ho.
Re: My Boyfriend's Afro Pick by horus8	Joe-joe 68.194.47.34	15-Mar-04/3:47 PM
One must first listen to the totally pointless "music" produced from the mind of Mr. 8 to appreciate the utter hypocrisy of this piece. 6 on craftsmanship 2 on message..........-4-
Re: The Happy Elixir by annabellee	some deleted user 68.66.197.171	15-Mar-04/4:19 PM
I'm a book lover too, and find this friendly to my addiction. But it's overdone even for a lover's taste.
Re: My Day Off by wilco	daveslady 140.211.124.224	15-Mar-04/4:27 PM
I absolutely loved it the best happy poem ive read
Re: I think of you by singinkygal	zodiac 152.18.129.57	15-Mar-04/4:59 PM
I read your username as Sin-Gin-KY[Jelly]-Gal. I would strongly recommend rewriting this poem with one of those images/topics as a central figure - a leitmotif, if you will. By the way, leitmotif is your word for the day. Have a nice one. -7-
Re: The Seagull Reader by SpiffyDoo	mindsigns 63.100.108.19	16-Mar-04/12:36 AM
I like it but it doesn't read like a poem, at least until the last stanza, it reads more like a paragraph -- maybe that was your point - i still thought it was good
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 64.12.96.71	16-Mar-04/4:41 AM
Half serious, half silly, many practices rolled into one. I likes.
Re: My Day Off by wilco	INTRANSIT 64.12.96.71	16-Mar-04/4:47 AM
Simple theme, simple rhyme. I like it, anyway
Re: My Day Off by wilco	zodiac 67.240.192.193	16-Mar-04/4:55 AM
The Zodiac/nutsac rhyme is doubly ironic since my real name is Yitzhak. -10-
Re: Allpoetry.com is to poetry what Asshats are to poetry by Shardik	INTRANSIT 64.12.96.71	16-Mar-04/5:05 AM
yes, yes. Give 'em a good Knawk Knawk.
Re: Brethren by richa	INTRANSIT 64.12.96.71	16-Mar-04/5:12 AM
Why it is that good stuff like this gets overlooked, I'll nevr know.
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 64.12.96.71	16-Mar-04/5:18 AM
Why not hyApatia? Anyway, where are the other poems you've written? I would add -natures canvas- somehow. Also, no, damn. The poem just changed on me.
Re: My Boyfriend's Afro Pick by horus8	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.114	16-Mar-04/6:59 AM
"Jeremi Britt Handrinos' first collection delivers an exemplary paradox of the authenticity of life lived put into words. He toys with conventional forms like a magician and throws off the surrogate voices of the past with his own pure and stark imagery. Bold, free, raucous at times, Handrinos splits the mundane, as sudden as a cut on the finger then leaves you to taste your own blood." -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 64.12.96.71	16-Mar-04/10:06 AM
I wish I was more Irish than I am. I wish I could be of more help to you. But you're getting such a grip on the 4th dimension and I have yet to grasp the third.
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 147.154.235.51	16-Mar-04/10:19 AM
Wow, I can't believe this masterpiece is only getting -8-'s It's brilliant, I tell you - BRILLIANT!
regarding some deleted poem...	A. Nomaly 66.53.39.233	16-Mar-04/10:26 AM
really kinda funny
Re: What is the use of the lid? by A. Nomaly	some deleted user 172.175.160.57	16-Mar-04/10:34 AM
Not really sure what this piece is about, but its quite interesting.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 172.175.160.57	16-Mar-04/10:36 AM
Quite.... interesting to say the least. I like the repeated used of the pushing change line.
Re: Allpoetry.com is to poetry what Asshats are to poetry by Shardik	some deleted user 172.175.160.57	16-Mar-04/10:37 AM
Oy, you have to hate poetry sites that have way too much ego built into them, glad I stumbled upon the one in my profile, so free. Anyhow, nice write, and true.
Re: I think of you by singinkygal	some deleted user 172.175.160.57	16-Mar-04/10:40 AM
A nice heartfelt piece. I enjoyed the opening line especially.