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zodiac 67.240.155.128 |
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zodiac 67.240.155.128 |
8-Mar-04/4:25 PM |
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Nice enjambment! You've been practicing!
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zodiac 67.240.192.183 |
8-Mar-04/8:55 AM |
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xxx 66.167.126.86 |
8-Mar-04/8:59 AM |
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215 |
8-Mar-04/9:09 AM |
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But what about the cat and the dog?
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Joe-joe 12.20.216.159 |
8-Mar-04/9:57 AM |
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Now Zodiac, I see that you are normally a very generous scorer (no pun intended). Why have you chosen to give me a zero on this work of art? Is it because:
1. You disagree with the point being made by the poem.
2. You truely believe it does not contain an ounce of wit and creativity.
3. You in fact have been trying for years to get married to a member of your same sex and, because of your inability to do so, have developed a deep seeded hatred for those who oppose gay marriage.
4. You are a bleeding heart pinko-commie who has fallen lock stock and barrel for the cultural fraud that has been promulgated by members of the so called "Gay Community"..........Go ahead Zodiac proceed with your venomous reply......
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richa 81.178.231.152 |
8-Mar-04/11:13 AM |
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The haiku argues ad hoc. You are making the argument against gay marriage in the knowledge that gay people can't procreate. What if they could, would you still disagree, of course you would.
Also to rockmage, it is mastUrbation.
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dmzoacan 68.9.128.195 |
8-Mar-04/2:59 PM |
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Why not write a poem about it you impotent fuckface. I mean, fuck, I hate fags. But I hate crappy poets more.
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some deleted user 147.226.163.126 |
8-Mar-04/3:12 PM |
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some deleted user 147.226.163.126 |
8-Mar-04/3:14 PM |
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some deleted user 147.226.163.126 |
8-Mar-04/3:37 PM |
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Delicate, meaningful disclosure.
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some deleted user 24.222.81.233 |
8-Mar-04/3:41 PM |
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Dear Joe and Joe,
If you try hard enough I'm sure you'll have something soon.
signed,
tc
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some deleted user 147.226.163.126 |
8-Mar-04/3:41 PM |
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I've been there too. Great poem. This is crap (my comment, I mean).
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| Re: âIâll Drop You Off At The Next Cornerâ by Blindpoetry |
Blindpoetry 68.106.171.15 |
8-Mar-04/7:32 PM |
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Ok, obviously ,what i thought was good wasn't good.
:-/
I know this isn't poetry, but can anyone donate critiquing? I'm desperate, now, for this one.
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| Re: To sow and reap by somemorepoetry |
somemorepoetry 207.69.140.22 |
8-Mar-04/7:51 PM |
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just an attempt at actually using a rhyme scheme of some sort
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Joe-joe 12.20.216.159 |
9-Mar-04/4:32 AM |
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Well well, you all have so many questions for me...yet you ignore the answers I have supplied you with and provide absolutely no answers to the questions I have posed. The onus is on those of you who support gay marriage to explain why our society should change its long standing definition of marriage to accommodate gay unions and to define the parameters of marriage as you see it. Not a peep about that from any of you! My position is clear...the institution of marriage was developed to facilitate a civil society by establishing a means of controlling men, protecting women, and nurturing the development of their offspring. I respect the loving relationships gays have but do not think marriage applies to such relationships. Exactly why is this problematic to you?
Zodiac,
Please spare me your simplistic and utterly unsophisticated argument about you and your wife choosing not to have children. Children are the product of male and female union..your decision not to procreate does not change that...marriage is intended to address the natural order of things...your personal decisions, defects, or circumstances are unimportant and of no consequence.....
DMZOACAN,
Please do not try to draw a parallel between our positions on this matter. You hate gay people...I have no problem with them....I support some of the objectives of the "gay movement"...but I don't agree with their position on gay marriage. And, by the way, if you want to read some piss-poor poetry take a look at your own stuff.
Darky,
Address the comments and questions I provided in response to your earlier posting (which you deleted) and I'll be more than happy to address your latest question. Let's see if you can focus your sick mind long enough to engage in serious discussion. Do it for Jesus.
Everyone......marry-up,
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some deleted user 24.222.81.233 |
9-Mar-04/4:33 AM |
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Don't see any beard here.
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| Re: âIâll Drop You Off At The Next Cornerâ by Blindpoetry |
richa 81.178.217.54 |
9-Mar-04/4:38 AM |
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The car metaphor or whatever it is is too clumsy and esoteric, and often absurd. You might as well talk about leaving a cake out in the rain and losing the recipe and it taking so long to bake. (MacArthur Park)
Read it out loud 'if you want to stop for food don't ride with me'. You can not write in an angry manner and then talk about stopping off for food.
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| Re: how my life is dying by Hostileintent |
Hostileintent 213.105.177.132 |
9-Mar-04/4:59 AM |
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i'm miles from home,i'm pissed off. i'm hurting,i'm in a cafe,and i write.i write
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| Re: The Cessation of Fidelity by wilco |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215 |
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