Re: If by elixir	Goad 217.82.6.238	23-Jan-04/4:13 PM
WAS. WAS WAS WAS WAS. WAS. AAAARGGGHHH how could you DO that to me. It's like scratching a blackboard. If love WAS I WOULD. If love IS I WILL. Got it?
regarding some deleted poem...	Goad 217.82.6.238	23-Jan-04/4:16 PM
this is marginally less obnoxious than most of the I can't live without you because I'm a teenager pomes, so you get a 4.
Re: Carrie by ErgoErgun	horus8 24.126.116.54	23-Jan-04/10:19 AM
You're always good.
Re: simple silence by daniella	Goad 217.82.6.238	23-Jan-04/4:22 PM
well, you certainly squeezed that one dry. You must have been thirsty. That can happen when you go wandering in the arroyos of life. Dry, dry, dry, and then BAM a deluge that leaves you broken and sodden.
Re: Games by fevriere	horus8 24.126.116.54	23-Jan-04/10:29 AM
Christ-off is right, the beginning of this poem is an upended seagull into the bow at 40 knotts.
Re: Poem #5 (of a series of poems for Boo) by Owner of the Sky	Goad 217.82.6.238	23-Jan-04/4:26 PM
I don't want to be touched by Boo.
Re: She Cries by holden_caulfield	Goad 217.82.6.238	23-Jan-04/4:38 PM
Who the fuck is she? WHY did the stars become runny? Let me get this straight: a naked ship is going to fall on us gently like a snowflake out of the winter mists? A ship... Okey dokey. How can the gentle, floating ship be both brittle and snowflake-like?
Re: That's What It's all about. by madjack2	Goad 217.82.6.238	23-Jan-04/4:49 PM
what what's all about? The hokey pokey? Please next time wait 'till it has stopped dribbling before you shake it all about.
Re: Your Kind by TripleHGurl	Goad 217.82.6.238	23-Jan-04/4:51 PM
What the hell are you talking about? What kind? Can we get some kind of clue here what you're talking about?
Re: His Master's Jodhpurs by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	zodiac 152.30.11.107	23-Jan-04/12:00 PM
Perfect. Put periods at the ends of the stanzas and a bow in its hair and send out into the street to the tune of a jig. Tomorrow it may drown itself in the Liffey, but tonight there's only tonight and infinite possibilities for love.
Re: His Master's Jodhpurs by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	zodiac 152.30.11.107	23-Jan-04/12:03 PM
I meant to say it doesn't sound like Poe. Sounds like Burns and Joyce (of course) but better. Poe was too clumsy, even in the dark tarn of Auber poem which I can't remember the name of now. And I think Jodhpurs is a great touch and don't know enough about Briticisms to know if you made it up or not.
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.165.172.185	23-Jan-04/12:10 PM
Suicide Soup?
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.165.172.185	23-Jan-04/12:14 PM
Good example of bad poetry.
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.165.172.185	23-Jan-04/12:15 PM
So many words to say so little.
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 67.240.155.80	23-Jan-04/12:59 PM
Welcome to our century. Here's an introductory 9, which in your time was a big numerological deal.
Re: Lullaby by Goad	zodiac 67.240.155.80	23-Jan-04/1:07 PM
I was cool until "left over from the war." Are you serious? And if you are, still don't say that. The best part is the first stanza. And if you're wondering why I gave yellowtail a 9 for a poem with one of those accented past-tenses ('claspèd') and you got just an 8 it's because I assume yellowtail is an adolescent and (as of now) that you are not.
Re: Sci-fi ode to poemranker nicknames by zodiac	INTRANSIT 204.110.225.254	23-Jan-04/1:21 PM
the harem smell of disinterest- perfect! Full load!
Re: His Master's Jodhpurs by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	INTRANSIT 204.110.225.254	23-Jan-04/1:36 PM
of course.
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 204.110.225.254	23-Jan-04/1:38 PM
less telling -more showing!!!!
Re: At The Station by Christof	INTRANSIT 204.110.225.254	23-Jan-04/1:41 PM
Nice to see a fresh post from you!!!!!