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regarding some deleted poem... The_Third_Isis 68.5.128.151 7-Dec-03/9:54 PM
You are a fountain of exquisite word play. We women are gentle to hold, and IF we fly away, or choose to stay either way, they can still be miserable. 10
regarding some deleted poem... Joe-joe 68.194.47.34 7-Dec-03/3:11 PM
Laura is living in a world of innocence. She gives freely of her love and trust. But those closest to her are living a lie....betraying this simple and wonderful young woman. The betrayals are brutal; a priest who abuses little boys, her parents who feign a happy marriage, and a boyfriend who cons her for the benefit of his sexual desires. As life goes on Laura will learn to survive in this world where we all live a life of betryal...primarily self betrayal...to satisfy our ambitions and compete in this disfunctional society....When we do lose our innocence we lose the ability to love with the simple purity we were born possessing. If sin does exist....this is the greatest one of all.
Re: Why you don't fall through the floor by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? kingit 67.69.62.220 7-Dec-03/5:44 PM
Are you Zodiac?
Re: To W by kingit kingit 67.69.62.220 7-Dec-03/6:17 PM
Thanking you, while I expose my soft, white under-belly.
Re: To W by kingit Shuushin 207.5.211.177 7-Dec-03/6:28 PM
Here's a nine, mr. pillsbury.
regarding some deleted poem... kingit 67.69.62.220 7-Dec-03/6:32 PM
This is cute!- I like IT.
Re: To W by kingit kingit 67.69.62.220 7-Dec-03/6:34 PM
I WISH I had some dough!!!
Re: Eggie, Eggie, Eggie by OneFingerAnswer kingit 67.69.62.220 7-Dec-03/6:52 PM
We should all learn to love a log! That's what I've notcied.
Re: Winter Lands: I by http://bandgeek http://bandgeek 216.195.145.106 7-Dec-03/6:59 PM
Winter Lands: II This winter, a new land to explore, suburban chickens peck over frozen ground. Salt water freezes on bluegreen estuary banks’ sloping glaze, as inviting as a waterslide in spite of eternal, internal struggle of salty ice. Clots of snow form on stilled river like frothing yeast in lukewarm water. Gentle spray over the dam freezes into frosty stalagmites: upside-down icicles reaching toward clouds. The traffic on Main Street comprises of privately owned pick up trucks with yellow plows attached on their way to rescue those who can pay. Shovelers relocate dense snow, one 12 x 16 x 8 inch rectangle at a time the satisfying fulfillment of metal scraping gravel struggles to be heard over obliviously aimed snowblower motors who fan their plumes of snow onto shovelers’ now diminutive accomplishments. In this land, it is so easy. Let the car hide under that mass, safety is not the certainty of an accessible city bus every fifteen minutes. Safety is hibernation behind storm windows among flannel and housecats, feeling assured, there is nothing to do out there anyway.
regarding some deleted poem... kingit 67.69.62.220 7-Dec-03/7:34 PM
It's romantic love OR you're really fuckin' horny!- I have brown eyes!
regarding some deleted poem... The_Third_Isis 68.5.128.151 7-Dec-03/8:07 PM
The name will beat to ornella,cruella, ornella..boom,bangboom..it's been years..ok maybe -months,and them dalmatian puppy's still havent returned.But why? never mind she still has her skin fold, well flank's of soldiers stand beside her, she'll be bussy for awhyle,they will sing in acapella "all the way for this wipes his sword of -blood" [Al the great] cant wayt forpart 2. Good tidings to you where ever you go and I wish you a merry Xmas and a..10 por vu
Re: Why you don't fall through the floor by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? The_Third_Isis 68.5.128.151 7-Dec-03/8:42 PM
A xmas cock-tail to beat all Quantum pressure , tall frosty glass the only normalisation factor in this concoction ahem..2 shots of bacardi rum 151 better yet will make it really elemental for this holiday season no need to invite the neighboors they will get a lil -bit wink..ahem quantro what the hell..be generous, all the stolish you want. As 33 a dash,H1 yep,He2 what the hell laugh a bit,N7 a bit expensive but why not,Pu94 a pinch of criptonite you'll fly anyhow just to be sure extra momentum now don't bother to shake, make it pretty and light it. pressureP=Boom now that's how to be a particle in a box happy reincarnation!!I'll drink eggnog with a shot of 151 hold the extras, a quantum 10
Re: Saying of Love by UrbaneSavvy The_Third_Isis 68.5.128.151 7-Dec-03/9:17 PM
ahhhh love,amore I've only tasted the ambrosia of this orchis/family but once [I mean the taste of love real love]it gave me asthenia.I am a godess so i recovered a bit quicker.I even lived in orcus because of it. My own creation..same birth mark distinguish from others characterize, make clear,boundary,mine. yet another century he is my bezel.Real love is eternal "Live as if you were to die tommorow.learn as if you were to live forever" Mahatma Gandhi. this touched my diamond hard heart a 9
regarding some deleted poem... The_Third_Isis 68.5.128.151 7-Dec-03/10:14 PM
Quiro hacer el amor contigo,AHAAA and por favor jurame que nunca te iras,I want to make many beautiful things Mi cuerpo te nesesita tanto, por favor...heeey this sound's like MY boyfriend.. just serius, lol si eres muy erotica y sensual but leave my extra sexy tall dark and handsome hombre alone..do you live in coconut grove flo? Maybe you can borrow him so you can keep writing this latin stuff,but be very carefull he is a cobra de capello "danegerous". FELIS NAVIDAD un 10
Re: Winter Lands: I by http://bandgeek The_Third_Isis 68.5.128.151 7-Dec-03/10:24 PM
Yikes soooo glad I'm no where near any of that till after xmas I caould harly handle california..with out a human fur coat a few blankets and alot of what wet dreams become a reality. I;30 am and the warm breeze is fluttering my satin robe...sigh keep your cats warm, and thanks for the well writen reminder of why I dont like real winter's. Best wishes to you and a hot apple cider my friend cheers.I need to sleep with only one silk sheet and no dry heat,that makes my nosebleed yuck. A 10 and to all a goood night!
regarding some deleted poem... kingit 67.69.62.220 7-Dec-03/11:03 PM
Alas, I can rest...I am exhausted!
Re: Thankless by shadowaura dragonfly 65.234.193.169 7-Dec-03/11:59 PM
Mirrors are too often used. Maybe he saw his reflection in something else? Toilet water perhaps?
Re: Painting the Town by dragonfly Shardik 24.126.116.54 8-Dec-03/2:11 AM
REal good stuff here.
Re: Saying of Love by UrbaneSavvy Shardik 24.126.116.54 8-Dec-03/2:20 AM
It's reak good but starts to go south especially at the last line. How about "a basis"?
Re: Why you don't fall through the floor by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? Shardik 24.126.116.54 8-Dec-03/2:44 AM
Tell that to a Quark Nugget.


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