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Re: Eggie, Eggie, Eggie by OneFingerAnswer horus8 24.126.116.54 6-Dec-03/2:12 PM
Dude, you've spelled nazi'd the coolest way yet. Have a ten. Lest you let go of my eggo
Re: Fireworks on an Open Sky by capachijim horus8 24.126.116.54 6-Dec-03/2:15 PM
How many syllabols does the word fire have hick?
Re: Thankless by shadowaura horus8 24.126.116.54 6-Dec-03/2:26 PM
I liked it.
regarding some deleted poem... horus8 24.126.116.54 6-Dec-03/3:46 PM
If you were soda, you'd be flat, and diet.
Re: Letting Go by ThoughtfulSoul The_Third_Isis 68.5.128.151 6-Dec-03/7:58 PM
Having someone come down on you is not too bad.. did he/she have bad breath? it's like this you start humming on the road again or Hit the road jack whatever it may be, make an excuse to go just go...because hell wherever you go there you are..love is for ever but during the holidays its a bitch like me..so i give you a 9, try not to strain unless its kegell hold it 1 trhu 10.. or an exorsism and you cant keep that father fuckeeeng demon down..slammm that prick hard with J. Mannings torn lifeless arm.Happy decking the halls with the same fellows, cranium or was it he's "pilminarys lungs"whatever... drink some misttle toe eggnog for me it will make things not soconfusing and bitter ,cheers!
regarding some deleted poem... Joe-joe 68.194.47.34 6-Dec-03/7:47 AM
JB my brother....why is it that all the roads you carve here lead to the same place? Is this part of your grand experiment? You just might have some talent in that brain of yours......if you could just slow down a bit.....find a bit of peace (not piece) in the day, and move your attention away from its ceaseless quest for the next sexual conquest. Our desires and emotions can be facilitators or obsticles depending on how we control and steer them.....relax a bit my friend...you know therapy is an option.
Re: xxxmas by kingit kingit 67.69.62.220 6-Dec-03/8:35 AM
crude= fun for some. Thanks, you've all given me a valuable lesson here.
Re: Thankless by shadowaura richa 81.178.231.233 6-Dec-03/10:07 AM
too many poems about seeing yourself in the mirror, no fresh insights here. This one is fairly lucid though, like the little rhymes.
Re: Everytime by krazymofo321 horus8 24.126.116.54 6-Dec-03/6:04 PM
Wow, you are a mofo.
regarding some deleted poem... The_Third_Isis 68.5.128.151 6-Dec-03/7:42 PM
Ti's the season Father fucker G'pa sucker for all wishes to come true.So I dont want no sugga plumms Heeel no!I want your Nutts saggy, "Yigga Hoa"slimed cheeseee translucent hollow sacks of sucked out magott sperm. Roasting on an open fire. Pleaseee say you will stop by, south beach is looong empty and we will round up some reindeer to keep your anus bussy. whyle me and some colombian friends who love gringos like you keep your pulmonary edema and cerebral hemmorage moving right along. How do you say in (INGISH) chucle..did you say "pilminary?" O.K. uno, dos, tres,let it snow let it snow... Here in florida, we have the right combo for you Mr gringo. Why you just never know what santa sends my way.Keep talking shit about peoples children...word to the wise keep your eyes open for those little caroler's la.. la.. Jack frost nipping on your nose.."sipping on a lil bacardi" waiting on yah.. If your ass is (*}I doubt it. Them "deer" are going to have a field day.And I have the ham's and ropes all ready to take you a swiimmming BOY... yesss sir.
Re: Everytime by krazymofo321 The_Third_Isis 68.5.128.151 6-Dec-03/7:45 PM
I say the same damn thang when i look at my pet lobster. Blessed with a 7
Re: Thankless by shadowaura The_Third_Isis 68.5.128.151 6-Dec-03/8:03 PM
You can do better things with mirrors..get your lover in on it {smile}all you have left is a mess but if you love him lick it of..then use windex on that mirror happy is a great state of mind, at least for 10 minutes merry xmas.a 8
Re: Fireworks on an Open Sky by capachijim The_Third_Isis 68.5.128.151 6-Dec-03/8:11 PM
That how i felt when I loved my only love at dawn.dimed all th lights the heat brought out the auras like fireworks.. But dark is not bad..as you wait upon the next heat in the tall savanah grass my tiger eyes dream and paint the sky with past lavender, blue,gold ,red as fire filled dawns. Thanks it's a 10
Re: xxxmas by kingit The_Third_Isis 68.5.128.151 6-Dec-03/8:24 PM
are magotts larvae..are silk worms larvae? well dunno im sooo happpy now i can swimm to key largo and drag J.Mannings chewed up corpus delictai.. and not feel the weight of hes deer punctured ass.Cheers to you i will drink to that xmas mess an happy new year..got's to go and dance, my sexy smooth, stand up and take notice, peachy clean untouched ass till the brake of dawn and then some. & I will kick your's Manning from one side of the missi to honolulu! I"ll drink to that.. in company of my friends who are waiting on you santa's lil helpers...come on down.
regarding some deleted poem... SupremeDreamer 204.31.160.165 7-Dec-03/7:19 AM
the ending gives me the shivers. 9
regarding some deleted poem... The_Third_Isis 68.5.128.151 7-Dec-03/9:56 AM
O.k. it's 12;10 pm here 8;am.Cali or wherever you may be.I do have a hangover, and i'm sorry for the slipshod ,lol comments last night, with the exception to J. Manning's .This noon I'm listening to some SKA loud and saxophoneee yep,wide awake. I will try not to[misspeeel] this time .This poem "That sound" is plain unatural..Why? Gma is lucky she didint step on a copperhead or diamond back...sipping cuban coffe.If you are a potatoe picker you may not know that rabbits SHRIEK a high pitched irritating..well like J.Manning would being that he is soooo full of shit, thats what he does fat ole ass on the toilet high pitched shrill that would make anyone snap he's wart hog neck. Children scream, yell,sing.Rabbitts are scandalous creatures like some people no composure "LOUD let me tell you all about, it scrambling, blaming, YOU made me into a,a yes that's it a rabbitt hah..and worst yet running around barefoot amongst copperheads,tigers, and well "potatoe pickers"..I,d ratter be a worm spinn my silk, be the SPICE thats cool. BUNNY's ..YUCK. well moral of this be a man or a J.Manning shrieking rabbit lol..Happy Holidays.this did turn my head and pee my pantie with laughter, se la vie thanks for the chucles wiping coffe of my nose.An 8 CIAO!!
regarding some deleted poem... The_Third_Isis 68.5.128.151 7-Dec-03/12:32 PM
Messages are only mixed when others want to see it that way, otherwise the message is "what it is" to each unique individual.Laura needs at some point as all of us will to let go,1]It means not to regret the past, but to grow and live for the future.2]To let go is not to judge, but to allow another to be a human being.3]To let go is not to deny, but to accept. And finally all of us on a cellular/spiritual level can accept as a simple fact that "I"do feel what I feel no matter how irrational,then I can quit trying to convince you and can get about the bussiness of understanding what's behind {My} irrational feeling's not YOUR"S.And when that's clear, the answers are OVIOUS and I dont need advice.Irrational FEELINGS make sense when we understand whats behind them. It doesnt mean I dont LOve you {you know who you are} It means I just am me and you are you.Wheter you listen with your mouth and have selective hearing. We all indulge in nasty deeds but they are Mine and yours to deal with. If we LISTEN more and speak with your heart, and not let your mind EDIT that WE then will not FAIL each other LAURA'S,& Clive"S whrn I tell you how I feel and you tell me why I should not feel that way..you know all everyone else is stupid and only YOU hurt, you are trampeling on my feelings..I have a heart that loves you, and a soul that listens.
regarding some deleted poem... ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 163.1.234.177 7-Dec-03/2:04 PM
I bet you play this on the acoustic guitar at parties (with your eyes half closed), and everyone stands round thinking how sensitive you must be. I find that very touching. -10-
regarding some deleted poem... ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 163.1.234.177 7-Dec-03/3:01 PM
During my absence I have been on a one month intensive poetry appreciation seminar. Wheras I once would have said that this poem was rubbish, now I think it is quite good. -10-
regarding some deleted poem... ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 163.1.234.177 7-Dec-03/3:08 PM
There seems to have been a spate of really lame rhyming poetry in the poems surrounding here, this one being the worst example.


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