regarding some deleted poem...	J.B. Manning 129.44.35.24	2-Dec-03/12:51 PM
I wish i lived in your world. So fluffy and fuzzy. hehe. I like the structure and flow of this one.
regarding some deleted poem...	richa 81.178.248.108	2-Dec-03/1:18 PM
'for her son, for the nude young male who lounges against a rock displaying his dildo ... whose works are but extensions of power to charm? From this weathered outcrop' Auden knew about the rise of the limestone too. This is quite cute, very readable, the end is plain daft though. Like the funny names too
Re: They who would have me forget by BleedingRose	richa 81.178.248.108	2-Dec-03/1:22 PM
good rhythm I think. Acid does not ache you though, it burns. In fact acid rain is too weak to do much at all, dissolve gravestones slowly perhaps.
regarding some deleted poem...	Joe-joe 68.194.47.34	2-Dec-03/1:35 PM
Rich, I like this. It has a nice touch but I must admit that I am not clearly capturing the image you paint. I am somewhat lost from "to give reason....." "as if to quell the stillness of the day" is sweet, very nice. Are you saying that the lake exists for more than mere show and if so what might that be?
regarding some deleted poem...	richa 81.178.248.108	2-Dec-03/2:09 PM
very good, little else to say.
regarding some deleted poem...	Jill Stockinger 66.167.204.219	2-Dec-03/2:38 PM
Good "slice of life."
regarding some deleted poem...	Jill Stockinger 66.167.204.219	2-Dec-03/2:39 PM
Some very memorable lines, good poem. Strong ending.
regarding some deleted poem...	Jill Stockinger 66.167.204.219	2-Dec-03/2:42 PM
Strikes me as pretentious in part- Not clear about the meaning of many of the lines.
regarding some deleted poem...	Jill Stockinger 66.167.204.219	2-Dec-03/2:44 PM
Dealing with a heavy subject, but in a very silly way. Oh Well!
regarding some deleted poem...	Jill Stockinger 66.167.204.219	2-Dec-03/2:47 PM
Cutesy! I enjoyed it!
Re: They who would have me forget by BleedingRose	Jill Stockinger 66.167.204.219	2-Dec-03/2:48 PM
The real feeling comes through. It comes across as a bit trite, but still heart-felt.
regarding some deleted poem...	Jill Stockinger 66.167.204.219	2-Dec-03/2:51 PM
Interesting use of the platitude about if enough monkeys were to type long enough, sooner or later one would write Shakespeare.
regarding some deleted poem...	Jill Stockinger 66.167.204.219	2-Dec-03/2:54 PM
Cutesy.
Re: thoughts and feelings (draft) by crwncka1	Jill Stockinger 66.167.204.219	2-Dec-03/2:58 PM
A bit too dogmatic for my taste, but I give you points for staying on track with your theme throughout the whole poem.
Re: Smiling by Jill Stockinger	J.B. Manning 129.44.35.24	2-Dec-03/3:05 PM
I'm not sure what's more interesting, the flow, structure, depth, simplicity, or the votes and comments. hehe. Good piece.
regarding some deleted poem...	kingit 67.70.120.209	2-Dec-03/3:11 PM
There we go...voila! note to self; ease up on the absinthe, bonehead!
regarding some deleted poem...	dragonfly 209.86.253.22	2-Dec-03/3:29 PM
Ime knot smurt enuff tiu uhnderstahnd this won
regarding some deleted poem...	dragonfly 209.86.253.22	2-Dec-03/3:33 PM
I was enjoying it until you let out that stinker at the end. Woooooh that was a beany one ˙
regarding some deleted poem...	J.B. Manning 129.44.35.24	2-Dec-03/3:40 PM
too long for my ADD sufferin ass...but I like the first few lines. ;-)
Re: Virgin Poet by emilyowey	J.B. Manning 129.44.35.24	2-Dec-03/3:43 PM
SCHWEEEEEEEEEEEEET! I LOVE this poem. The flow, the vocab, the forward thrusting cadence. 10!