regarding some deleted poem...	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.116.54	2-Dec-03/11:25 PM
Not bad at all.
regarding some deleted poem...	dragonfly 209.86.253.22	2-Dec-03/3:52 PM
yay for little secret dirties!ˇ
regarding some deleted poem...	Bachus 24.126.116.54	2-Dec-03/3:53 PM
Like a piece of cheese cake passing itself off as a whoopie cushion scratch n sniff. But I'll give you a six for making great use of a dictionary, and "Pulminary consciousness" lol. 6
regarding some deleted poem...	Bachus 24.126.116.54	2-Dec-03/3:56 PM
That, and blue toilet water.
Re: . by Bobjim	dragonfly 209.86.253.22	2-Dec-03/3:57 PM
yeast infection?
Re: An early apology to the Hiltons by Shardik	dragonfly 209.86.253.22	2-Dec-03/4:00 PM
I've made better homemade porn than Paris. Wanna see?‚
regarding some deleted poem...	Bachus 24.126.116.54	2-Dec-03/4:00 PM
A wonderful projection on an absent canvas.
regarding some deleted poem...	Bachus 24.126.116.54	2-Dec-03/4:04 PM
I am alone. But, with cable. I am gay, but unhappy. I am a fire hose at an igloos cremation. I am a turnip.
Re: For Brianna by MaliqaTara	dragonfly 209.86.253.22	2-Dec-03/4:11 PM
I'm sorry for your loss. This was a really touching poem.
regarding some deleted poem...	Joe-joe 68.194.47.34	2-Dec-03/4:46 PM
Ok, I was able to get over that tiny speed bump of a title you've crafted here.....but the first line of the "poem"...I did not have a tank powerful enough to get over that major bump in the road. "Shattered fragments of muted speech" ????? It seems that you are attempting to be profound but it just doesn't work. Words with no meaning and...well...fragments of muted speech.....yes that aptly describes what it is!! Perhaps I am mistaken and you really are a misunderstood genius....whose to say? Keep on keepin on.
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	2-Dec-03/5:00 PM
some very good words here - but so many - so many that they could work together well, I think. I have a test I use when I fear that I may sound too pretentious (whenever many large words appear you run that risk): scramble some of the sentences, or swap them from one stanza to the next and see if your meaning remains - if it does - then you prolly don't have any. You may find, however, that the sentences stand individually, or - that the syntactical codification remains consistent; in that grammatical eventuality one might dispense with structural, or concrete limitations... I wonder how this would do as one solid block of text?
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	2-Dec-03/5:02 PM
btw - it certainly makes as much, or as little sense as many other poems do with consistently smaller/easier words. I do not mean that as a crit - because I can derive meaning from this one.
Re: Ode to My Crack by J.B. Manning	Bachus 24.126.116.54	2-Dec-03/6:14 PM
"Death is the maker of the mask that veils the sickness of addiction. Sorrow and suffering are but a mild comfort to the junkie. Whence the pain has come is evident to everyone but that single lost soul, until he wills himself to break free and is forever made stronger by the journey." LOLTTM! um death is the maker of blee. when you find addiction is a g string taco in an industrial crack pipe then suck your boobie empty and start at go!? YOU ARE AN IDIOT! As soon as you embrace that fact you'll be able to unglue that penis off of your chin and put it back on your forehead.
regarding some deleted poem...	Bachus 24.126.116.54	2-Dec-03/6:48 PM
Yep.
regarding some deleted poem...	Bachus 24.126.116.54	2-Dec-03/6:56 PM
Classy.
Re: my hunger has become a hunger for revenge by nentwined	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.116.54	2-Dec-03/11:21 PM
Simply the best.
Re: Moving by kingit	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.116.54	2-Dec-03/11:29 PM
Christ.
Re: HOW TO BE FUNNY by Lord Ganus	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.116.54	2-Dec-03/11:36 PM
This is why you'll go to heaven and hell. 11!
regarding some deleted poem...	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.116.54	2-Dec-03/11:38 PM
boobies are for boobs.
regarding some deleted poem...	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.116.54	2-Dec-03/11:39 PM
The last resort to resort towns.