regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 147.154.235.51	3-Dec-03/7:08 AM
it's fair - I give it a 12. ;o) Good stuff, K.
regarding some deleted poem...	J.B. Manning 129.44.35.24	3-Dec-03/9:42 AM
oh boo hoo, everyone is picking on me, oh boo hoo. I'm so hurt. HA HA. Dickcheese.
Re: Pleas Dont.. by MysticalRaven88	J.B. Manning 129.44.35.24	3-Dec-03/11:03 AM
If you took out some of the excessive -so's- it would be so much better. ;-)
Re: The War On Pedophilia by miraclemaker	J.B. Manning 129.44.35.24	3-Dec-03/11:06 AM
MJ IS INNOCENT!
Re: How Many Miles? by miraclemaker	J.B. Manning 129.44.35.24	3-Dec-03/11:08 AM
hmm, interesting.
Re: my hunger has become a hunger for revenge by nentwined	J.B. Manning 129.44.35.24	3-Dec-03/11:10 AM
It's ok. I don't know...I just don't like it.
regarding some deleted poem...	J.B. Manning 129.44.35.24	3-Dec-03/12:08 PM
beautiful. I like your style.
regarding some deleted poem...	richa 81.178.255.97	3-Dec-03/12:20 PM
hmmm, consciousness I think does not mediate anything. The information processing, the neurons within the brain attend to stimuli. If attention is sufficient that stimulus is brought into consciousness. And did you know that bar decay of the brain we never forget anything. It just can become too distantly connected to be retrieved. Other than that, a clever idea, memory vs memories. Like the half rhyme consciousness and synapse too
Re: my hunger has become a hunger for revenge by nentwined	richa 81.178.255.97	3-Dec-03/12:24 PM
'Hmmm I need some inspiration/ want to write a poem/ feeling a bit hungry/ heh hungry for revenge/heh heh heh.'
Re: my hunger has become a hunger for revenge by nentwined	<~> 167.206.181.179	3-Dec-03/12:40 PM
and they'll have fun fun fun 'til her daddy burns her honda away....
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.126.116.54	3-Dec-03/1:06 PM
Never heard of them. 7
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.126.116.54	3-Dec-03/1:08 PM
I really enjoyed how you took me absolutely no where.
Re: The War On Pedophilia by miraclemaker	horus8 24.126.116.54	3-Dec-03/1:10 PM
Very good, it's a miracle.
Re: The War On Pedophilia by miraclemaker	horus8 24.126.116.54	3-Dec-03/1:12 PM
Only because, for some reason, that shits not funny. Kids and animals should never be abused. It's a sign of devilution.
Re: Moving by kingit	kingit 67.69.63.23	3-Dec-03/1:21 PM
Christ?- no.- just a representative, doing his shit-work for him.
Re: my hunger has become a hunger for revenge by nentwined	Shuushin 147.154.235.51	3-Dec-03/1:33 PM
this is good [smiling, slowly backs toward door] "My dumpling's plumb been plucked, and by a lesser man," - an excellent line.
Re: Devilution by Jeremi B. Handrinos	Shuushin 147.154.235.51	3-Dec-03/1:37 PM
I much like this - is most excerrent. You pumped this out quickly too, didn't you?
Re: How Many Miles? by miraclemaker	Jeremi B. Handrinos 24.126.116.54	3-Dec-03/1:55 PM
I like this a lot, I don't care why, and I like that too.
Re: Devilution by Jeremi B. Handrinos	J.B. Manning 129.44.35.24	3-Dec-03/2:07 PM
I don't mind a fraction of your poetry. Though is says very little for your personality.
regarding some deleted poem...	J.B. Manning 129.44.35.24	3-Dec-03/2:31 PM
eh