Re: Grind by INTRANSIT	Caducus 195.92.168.165	27-Nov-03/3:17 AM
oh yeah ! By the way the name please of the grandfather clock (ripping its guts out poem please????) I took everything I had and put it underground to decay, and welcomed the invisible world. A world of the unseen vitamin, where thoughts become the granules of life. Where dirt is edible and tastes like the sun.
Re: Second Sight by Nitroxide	Caducus 195.92.168.165	27-Nov-03/3:19 AM
typo line 2. Admirable sentiment, this if more concise could pack a harder punch, nevertheless i liked where you went with it.7
Re: Don't fuck with Mr. Haiku by SupremeDreamer	richa 81.178.252.98	27-Nov-03/8:36 AM
More a senryu (a haiku has a nature theme). Giving this a nature theme would be impressive. Good though, the soft feel of the words and then bang.
Re: Mr Zero? Your a coward. by DreamerSupreme	richa 81.178.252.98	27-Nov-03/8:42 AM
same here (strangely at 3.30 every day)
regarding some deleted poem...	Katzclear 12.222.55.183	27-Nov-03/2:51 PM
Beautiful. plenty of thought and emotion went into it, im sure :)
regarding some deleted poem...	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.116.54	27-Nov-03/4:05 PM
An interesting perspective that's for sure.
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	27-Nov-03/4:20 PM
I actually like this, not sure why you would want to toast it. maybe used "pulchritudinous" once too many times? -8-
Re: River of life by Roisin	electroman1979 205.188.208.105	27-Nov-03/4:38 PM
free of what? is death a blessing for us or a curse? i don't quite agree with the content, but its a good poem, 7
regarding some deleted poem...	electroman1979 205.188.208.105	27-Nov-03/4:40 PM
great poem, keep up the good work, i loved it, 10
regarding some deleted poem...	NoSage 63.190.65.107	27-Nov-03/8:24 PM
What was this unforgettable gift? If I might be so bold as to ask.
Re: 0 by MacFrantic	NoSage 63.190.65.107	27-Nov-03/8:26 PM
My my, aren't we full of ourselves?
regarding some deleted poem...	tadpole 63.231.100.33	27-Nov-03/8:31 PM
I've known that feeling. . .cute poem
Re: Holding on for Jesus by Everyone	NoSage 63.190.65.107	27-Nov-03/8:32 PM
You know man, Salvation isn't easy. I hope you have the strength to hold on, it's a rough ride, and everyone seems to want to pull you off.
regarding some deleted poem...	tadpole 63.231.100.33	27-Nov-03/8:35 PM
freaky, are you trying to give us nightmares?
regarding some deleted poem...	NoSage 63.190.65.107	27-Nov-03/8:49 PM
Allow yourself to meld with the feelings you have, don't flee from them, They will help you grow.
Re: Small made Large by tadpole	NoSage 63.190.65.107	27-Nov-03/9:04 PM
Well, I wish I had the energy to experience that pain.
regarding some deleted poem...	tadpole 63.231.100.33	27-Nov-03/9:36 PM
like the poem, sometimes I feel the same way; so what do you see deep in my heart from my few little poems I wonder?
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 204.31.172.89	27-Nov-03/10:14 PM
sweet & sour takeout till the split rummy hour can not see the calm eye of a tornado bitter & dour it will grip you with its power dust will sting & cover what you know Its my brewing pot- sprinkled with spice my foe becomes apart of the boiling gumbo sqealing with angst- flailing like mice woe for having been caught in the flow Its a water-park jungle, so do bring the goggles and a sturdy vessel- or one that can float these turbid tides will give you plenty of wobbles casting saltwater stains on what you wrote but- hey? its earned my blessing of six.
Re: 0 by MacFrantic	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	27-Nov-03/10:19 PM
such things do boggle the mind.
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	27-Nov-03/10:20 PM
was working until about the second to last line.