regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.165.174.187	19-Nov-03/4:46 PM
A symphony! An Opera!
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.165.174.187	19-Nov-03/4:53 PM
Very Powerful. Your hammer works wonderfully. Pounds right through.
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.126.116.54	19-Nov-03/5:50 PM
Interesting, Joe Gould?
Re: She was supposedly yours... as was I by Katzclear	horus8 24.126.116.54	19-Nov-03/5:53 PM
lol. funny poem, ah here's a correction, "you think from your problems your freed" you are?
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.126.116.54	19-Nov-03/5:55 PM
A truly pathetic sentiment! 10!
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.126.116.54	19-Nov-03/5:56 PM
Sounds like your common theme.
Re: charred pixels by FreeFormFixation	horus8 24.126.116.54	19-Nov-03/5:59 PM
Kickers and tweet tweets.
regarding some deleted poem...	Bachus 24.126.116.54	19-Nov-03/6:51 PM
Have you read my Sestinas? They're splendid, as splendid as an exploding parrot, and foreign dogfood.
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	19-Nov-03/7:10 PM
there is some quite excellent language in there, and the ending is gracefully delivered from the previous stanza's full-on self-conscious flow. I'd like to see some of the descriptiveness trimmed [weeded?] out, but hesitant for the risk of loosing the feeling of dreamlike recollection/fantasy this brings. For example, "we walk...", "we scrawl..." - might be worth a look, dunno. I like it better than the "5" at the bottom - -8.5- so I'll round up.
Re: What I know of monsters by Bachus	A. Nomaly 198.211.135.88	19-Nov-03/7:39 PM
Monster? You? Your'e kidding right?
Re: She was supposedly yours... as was I by Katzclear	sliver 63.189.49.245	19-Nov-03/8:30 PM
Could that possibly be horus, being NICE? no, my feeble eyes decieve me I'm sure. WHATS UP KATZ, I see he got his own.
Re: The lasts of Joe by Freethinker1602	electroman1979 64.12.96.46	19-Nov-03/8:30 PM
how is it that you can put on seven poems in a row and everyone else can only put three on a week?
Re: Theology by dougsoderstrom	smlink84 68.98.150.99	19-Nov-03/9:12 PM
Great, Praise Jesus!
regarding some deleted poem...	The_Third_Isis 24.126.116.54	19-Nov-03/9:35 PM
ok a little streached but it was a good read. cheer 0
regarding some deleted poem...	The_Third_Isis 24.126.116.54	19-Nov-03/9:35 PM
ok a little streached but it was a good read. cheer 0
Re: Blessing in desguise by GekoHawaii	The_Third_Isis 24.126.116.54	19-Nov-03/9:36 PM
have u been to hawaii?
Re: Denied by Freethinker1602	The_Third_Isis 24.126.116.54	19-Nov-03/9:56 PM
atta boy...er lucy girl? very alive.
Re: Renewal by hummers86	ShaNoN+960317485 199.40.206.3	19-Nov-03/10:11 PM
:o)
Re: thor an his hammer by baphomet	The_Third_Isis 24.126.116.54	19-Nov-03/10:12 PM
only THOR can lift hes hammer...so you little GOD you, hammer away, your brilliant poetry. You are AWESOME. Horses like apples and sugar cubes that will sidetrack them of your minitaur's? er.. back{ wink}
Re: Blessing in desguise by GekoHawaii	ShaNoN+960317485 199.40.206.3	19-Nov-03/10:13 PM
:o)