Jeremi B. Handrinos
on some deleted poem
15 Nov 2003, 6:14 PM
Righto.
Why'd you erase the comment?
Why did you erase
The comment on Intransit's
poem? Cuz you're so smart.
Sweat.
Courageous effort. Well done! I congradulate you and I hope you enjoy your self-pity(ful) state. I won't play Good Samaritian with you cause he wouldn't give a second glance...you yourself said.
Let those red tears keep streaking down, maybe what you need is purification. And I didn't know society had such a appetite for losers. And yes, please learn to spell! (For your sake!)
Man, your horrible.
The last line doesn't go.
What is it with you and masticated?
Do not worry. I think poesyests are too stuffed with emotions to comment appropriately.
By the way. Saturn is not ringed by poisonous vapors. lol. I don't know who told you that? Please don't give me 900 zero's Nentwined's dad? Lord knows people have gotten away with much less onthis site for TRUE poets as yourself and your son.
Do you really think mercury is half frozen?
:o)
Why do you call yourself the fallen angel who now hates God and all whom he created in his image?
Cute.
Sometimes, it's hard to tell your dad "no" when he pisses on the carpet, and the furniture.
like it! good feeling.put into the words
You make me want to end my life with a large orange construction cone wedged up into my ass hole by a jet engine John. Aint THat Ace!
Classy. I wish my mom was normal like that a lot.
Bring your in and your to together. Other than that, increase your verb power and symbolism. For instance? Who is he. Where is the park? who's us?
Cliche, but honest.
You are unique, and I need not tell you why. you are a wonderful mother, and an exceptional lover.