INTRANSIT
on A Coven of Toes by sixtoedwonder
15 Nov 2003, 12:49 PM
hope you're not superstitious. funny.
is true, is true.
six words - you're getting there.
-8-
Roger that; nicely done.
-9-
A hopeless compilement of hopelessnes. Reminds me of sliver's lyrics. in other words. TOTAL SHIT! here's your 0.
What is that lotion in your beard? 0.
And that's why you settled for driving a truck in life.
Jesus, that was just shit poor. Hey I know? Ask Rockmage and his clan of Crap poets to put it on the best list for you, Nentwined won't mind, afterall his poetry fucking sucks too. Nothing like a bunch of complacent weekend poets pooling for you. Here's a 0. Please learn how to spell.
Christ! I'm guilty of that too? I hate being human.
Nice big words. very cool.
Love the title.
Love the ditty - make a me laugh, yes, it did.
have an -8-
welcome to the USSR, comrade.
This would make a good Senryu.
-7- for what could have been.
Oh man that was a fun read. The poem itself was only a 6 but the comments earned a ten. "freaky stalker zero dropper" had me laughing so much it hurt.
rockmage had me fooled. I was under the impression that he cared not for the afairs of humans and that only poems of rocks and trees could catch his eye.
I love it. . .10
whoa!
This is right where it belongs, that's for sure.
oh christ, not more.
Can't you write about anything else other than how you've been wronged by the nefarious poemranker characters?
-0-
a poem per user name, one way to do it.
this is cute.
-7-
why you make me read this? huh?
is is kinda catchy though... so, I think that, and the fact it is made up entirely of words that, I figure, are of your own construction - brings it up to a:
-1-
too easy, this one. And you should not masticate, it is against God's law, and you will be blinded.
blessed with a 1.
genie us
Interesting and creative. Atthe same time totally DRUNK