ah, if this is a parody.. its a pile of shit.. because its not fucking funny- whos your mentor? Darth Vader on crack and poppy seeds? i sense much loathing in you. (oh wise one!- lmao, my starwar quotes tickle me) your wheelchair needs power brakes. jesus recommends it.

ah, if this is a parody.. its a pile of shit.. because its not fucking funny- whos your mentor? Darth Vader on crack and poppy seeds? i sense much loathing in you. (oh wise one!- lmao, my starwar quotes tickle me) your wheelchair needs power brakes. jesus recommends it.

holy shit thats alot of words - actually, its only 680 - but it felt like more. I read them all. Quite a cathartic rant - feel better??

Well that was poop.

I totally get it, but it took me a few (cuz I'm medicated). I love cable. You should get cable (or DSL) or a modem that works.

a well conveyed [senryu]; a simple sentiment. gave me a smile.

kindof a lyrical quality. Not crazy about the lowercase "i"s, and maybe a tad too many cliches/term dropping - but workable methinks.

Pretty excellently done. Wonderful language use and the thing is polished up quite nicely. the use of "sanguine" gives me a little pause though - I can appreciate the aliteration it gives, and I see you've tied it in with the last stanza - but I just can't roll over it. Prolly just me. Maybe it's *because* of the alliteration with "submerged"? Maybe swap out submerged instead?

huh//? I'm not a bitch.... you recive a nine.

Yes that's the Gist of it. Just take a look at the best list and you will see the Jesus enima contents. lol! 10!

I liked it. It speaks from the heart. May the Sacred Heart of Jesus have mercy on us.

my soccer coach would always tell me "go for the goal" so i listened, sliped on some poo' and broke my collar bone. In which ended my peewee career. He also said "think of the goal, not poetry" so i think you should play soccer. your mind is some where else. 3

my soccer coach would always tell me "go for the goal" so i listened, sliped on some poo' and broke my collar bone. In which ended my peewee career. He also said "think of the goal, not poetry" so i think you should play soccer. your mind is some where else. 3

[Brandon, could you please come up for dinner, NOW!, thank you] Sorry Liver, I used your shit paper to summon my brother, but I really have no other comment. It's dull.

sliver, go with the flow. trust me.. its not as bad as it seems.. ;)

Hmmm, I hope to die before that day greets me with it's heady warmth. Sorry mageman, I can see myself with those grey pubes, but I can't. ya know?

wow i guess i missed the special on the "nigh bears" oh well. $?><kpoi4

I like your haiku/senryu, you do a very nice job of conveying a single, not necessarily simple, thought in them. People think that's easy. Spewing the first thing that comes into your head and bleeding bile and blood all over a page - THATS easy. Sorry, I was spewing. Done now.

I hope you're both ass raped by a pack of wild bums http://www.rotten.com/library/culture/bumfights/

Reminds me of the turing test (which is very topical) Have you poked around at the transcripts from the turing tests? Fun - they come so close, then this happens: bot: "I like to chat with my friends, what do you like to do?" me: "martial arts" bot: "ouch, that hurts, don't press the keys so hard!" me: "cute - thats actually a clever response" bot: "Now the real truth comes out. Go on" [splat] Thats an actual transcript. http://www.surrey.ac.uk/dwrc/loebner/