A need to repeat yourself? Is a need to beat yourself and get doggy styled.

"for goodness is often impotence masked" If this was a bumper sticker? You'd never get insured.

Thousand year chance. Under the rome heading. Try something else please. I don't agree with the repetition in this case.9

pencil (track). the harsh word stands out. find something softer. I hope you're comparing all the versions. Don't ovr work it.

Dave gave you a zero because he's mysterious! Like a woman's vagina.

You meant hells bowels.

i regrtet not commenting before 10

very good moth I praise you with a limited adition mint pat on the back. 10 patpatpat

Hmmm:? okay thats enough, it's very . . . well use your imagination. enough said cheereyo lllll. . .

lets see. i liked it. it reminds me of the poem that my nephew read out loud for the "zygote poem society" All in all it was _______. (you fill in the blank. 11511.

what a great poem was this inspired by ur ran over dog Fido . 4.ioih

oh let me guess, Inspired by the time Fifi went in the car motor for heat. 4<>gj

(TEAR)hit home,SOB 6?><ouy

app. great title, i loved the way it shot out. 10>?<:?:LK:"?>?"

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A masterpiece of poo poetry. let it drip. 10.

hrmm.. interesting ideas, now: place, point, to whom and *drumroll* women problems again or what? though, it held my attention atleast, but didnt do much to feed my universe. Blessed with 7.

4 darks - 5 shadows... etc.. goddamn, this is a pimple man, the repetition amazing - sizzled me into a micro dust particle within seconds. why dont you give it a new title? such as: jiggsaw puzzle. blessed with 4.

I remember this one. I like it much, this pain. Well, of a sort. You represent it well. Though "come to sleep" seems disjoint with the sweaty, slick passion ("come to bed" seems like it would fit the two views/times better, but perhaps that's just my own reality).

hmmm, seems a bit dry. The laughing at funerals part has potential, but yeah...it's a bit dry. Like toast without butter.