J.B. Manning
on The Gone-Too-Far Kitchen by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
27 Oct 2003, 10:06 AM
You see, a backspace is eternally depressed,
Submerged deep in the sanguine depths,
Of illiterate logic,
A child's voice is heard nonetheless.
--nice, very nice. Actually Dave, your humor has, in the past, inspired me to not take things so seriously.
Good stuff.
eh
uuughhh!!! with the typo's - of course that's what I meant...
maybe it is one of the few large group rituals our culture has intact?
I know what you mean by "equally golden brass", but it is a contradiction.
Did you mean to misspell ridiculous because of Nazi red? Good, but a
bit preachy, is it not?
righteous
why "come to sleep" instead of "come to bed"? I am sure that you have a good reason.
I like the title.
Retaliating huh? I respectfully disagree with your "hate the use, not the power"
line. You must be feeling optimistic today, with your assumption that what
America "could" be will be the future.
nice and enjoyable, but you couldn't help but throw in a little wit, anyhow.
Bobjim
on Jesus and the spider (Should have bought a GT 500 Glider) by Don-Quixote
27 Oct 2003, 12:14 PM
What an interesting poem. Did you know that Jesus was actually a spider?
shorter and fiddled a bit more.
Yippy a cruise with friends! Sounds like a midwest dream come true! And to recall it with poetry is simply splendid! God, Why Bukowski never picked it as a subject to be poetic about troubles me? hmmmm? Perhaps because it's nauseatingly boring and useless to the rest of the world, and once again nobody could give a fuck but you?Do you give a fuck?You guys should start the AIDS cruiseline for children and you and your pathetic clique of self absorbed dipshits could teach them how to properly sip their get away cocktails and visit different tourist exploited paradises until you all had golden tans and excellent storys to recant back at the office when it was all over.
WOW!!! 25.33
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
27 Oct 2003, 3:06 PM
Awesome job! 10.
I have a question. What the fuck?
horus8
on Jesus and the spider (Should have bought a GT 500 Glider) by Don-Quixote
27 Oct 2003, 3:45 PM
What's the contraction for "Ain't" Ainot? That's what I like about you. You're a loose canon. And personaly? Incest rocks.
Congratulations! This is an utterly unreadable failure of poorly connected words, but I'm sure you think it's the best thing you've ever thought up. Good for you. What ever helps you sleep at night.
Not totally hopeless.
this makes me uncomfortable duh
I am not distastfully displeased I just love zeros
but no I want a 5.....