Happy Birthday!!!! Fabulous poetry, as usual!

Slow down with that fancy click and paste thing you've got going. I really like this one, but I see Kaolin didn't care for those ten page prose submissions. I must admit it was even hard for me to read through them, and I like you more than all of them.Keep it simple, some of us are slow.

The second time reading through aloud, the outrage came through strong and hard, ready to erupt.

WOW, for a second I thought this was about me. SIGH. Well done. How are you special enough even with a poem wanker award, to submit 4???? at a time?

Well! I like it. (Yuor incessant blabber that is) but that prose seems to have struck a note. I often write about not being able to write, Inspiration huh?

Now I see why you have 12 hits and only 2 comments. Grow up!

Happy Birthday slightly delayed!!! I'll be 56 in a couple of months. Things don't change. Smiling is best. I can't always do that.

Does this mean Hell's fire is getting dimmer?

This fits the lyric category. Read it a couple of times out loud. The music is there.

You are here. You are one of us. I question that every day. I just lost an Annie to something,I'm not sure. I wish that walking a mile in your sodden shoes could bring you back. I would show you the truth.Perhaps you might see it?

Like a groom to his/her virgin wife on wedding night, nervousness before the consummation..

Simply and well said.

I'm starting to get cross-eyed. Lovers.

Never saw a purple sunset. Tis another song.

L2-pushed to the side to vanishes....????? L(-I desirer from you...desire? Very good self pity. I don't understand line 2. Sorry!

I'm about to use a spanky to wipe up your silly ass. Ms? Ms? Are you trying to piss me off? I'm a woman Like youre gay. (hope yer not a fag)Still, 5

Let me know what you think of this poem.

nice

it has a nice shpe.

this was written just after my mothr passed away.