kingit
on An Ode to the cat fish head helmet on your penis by horus8
15 Oct 2003, 6:34 AM
heroic vulva holster for the love gun-- look what KILL BILL inspired
As a scholar at the "Grammatical Scholaria Royale", as I like to call it, I find this poem to be a product of a combination of idiocy, geekness and blatant homosexual tendencies towards certain members of staff. Do not befoul our school with your presence by turning up tommorrow or ever again!
As a poem, I don't think much of the first bit. The second bits kind of nice though (which means a lot coming from me, read my comments and see). A 10 on principle and I would now advise against reading my "Ode to Necrophilia".
hard to avoid the need for synthesis, isn't it?
I like this, it strikes a chord.
This is shit, and you're a cunt. Thanks!
-10-
Excellent use of letters of the alphabet to form words.
*9*
Tits
on Addicted to the agony of waiting for something you love by Mister Cakes
15 Oct 2003, 7:50 AM
This is really excellent stuff. It makes me want to sing a hymn.
It has a Dr. Suess air about it, only without the cleverness.
This is rubbish. Email me at james.wright@oriel.ox.ac.uk and I'll explain in more detail.
This is rubbish. Email me at james.wright@oriel.ox.ac.uk and I'll explain in more detail.
This is rubbish. Email me at james.wright@oriel.ox.ac.uk and I'll explain in more detail.
This is rubbish. Email me at james.wright@oriel.ox.ac.uk and I'll explain in more detail.
note to self: don't make the title of the piece be the only line that falls flat.
make "a poisonous mushroom" be "poisonous mushrooms" and it will flow better, imo.
this is not your sport, 195.157.153.253
Talk about a interesting nightmare. Great job.
Excellent as (I think) always.
Excellent. -10-
Excellent. -10-
If you are going to post and know the rules, the chastisement and demand that someone not vote how they feel is in very bad taste. You may as well say, "Don't look at me unless you give me a ten." If the admonishment in the beginning is part of the poem, such as "I am now dead. Judge me, but do not send me to the lowest level of Hell!” I think it is good writing...otherwise not. Considering a person’s feelings is important, usually only to the person considered. A work is put here to be critted. As this is presented as a Eulogy and you are demanding special treatment for sympathy, I give you a cold-hearted 10.