no idea. but i like the horse collapsing imagery.

There's never a videocamera around when needed, is there? Aflack my ass.

This is simple to see im in love with simple words that express the soul of man who is in contains of desire and just love can rescure him ,so i started to write desirous words upon the mask of days and nights

awesome title. Toss a questionmark into the text and call it done. I like.

this is about a rose, right? "droprain" is a cool word. actually there is an interesting slant to the language here (and a few spelling errors). I'm guessing you could convey the same meaning and emotion in about a sixth the words.

it is amazing how many meanings "render" has. I've seen you do alot with alot, and now - alot with a few. cool. This should have a few stanza buddies, I think.

Quite a nice first stanza there. Perhaps I'm a bit jaded, but some of the rhymes in the remaining stanza brought me pause. I'm thinking you could consolidate the second and third to arrive at something that compares with the first.

"I see dead poems" what did they whisper, what did they whisper??

I'm liking the title, and many of the individual lines. As for the thing-in-itself, I will nod knowingly, and select six from the dropdown menu at right.

Well Bachus... You're finally a head of your penis. lol. I've surpassed Blade to regain ownership of our pud.

Here's a 1.

Lord Chutney for one.

micah isaiah handrinos (my son spelled his name)

Interesting.

I have seen these bastards in the cinema and felt like sliting there throats with the stale popcorn they sell. On my last visit to the Odeon I heard someone groaning and told them to shut the fuck up, on my exit i realized the person i shouted at was in a wheelchair - still fair treatment to all lol.

This is weak

Ambiguity is the face mischief

beak

Feeling quite "mild" right then?

Cheers. Yep. Cheers. Bye. Yep. Bye. You too. Cheers.