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xxx on some deleted poem 13 Oct 2003, 5:40 PM
I may not understand this one, but it certainly does something well.
xxx on some deleted poem 13 Oct 2003, 5:45 PM
Sort of 'Why is the Sky Blue?' If you are doing this as a slam on mindless morons, it works.
xxx on some deleted poem 13 Oct 2003, 5:48 PM
I really like this. I can't why, not because I do not want to, but because I don't know.
I especially like the 3rd + 4th Stanzas. Well done.
sliver on some deleted poem 13 Oct 2003, 6:18 PM
Mourn, but we know you can't spell. Pretty good writer though.10
god'swife on Forever Tired by Antares42 13 Oct 2003, 6:58 PM
Boring
god'swife on some deleted poem 13 Oct 2003, 6:59 PM
This is not poetry. It's only talk.
god'swife on conundrum, part 1 by poetekzen 13 Oct 2003, 7:01 PM
meandering. clever, but only at first.
god'swife on The Red Tree by raysaun 13 Oct 2003, 7:03 PM
in the last stanza change 'saw' to 'felt'. Also snowballs can only be made my people, not trees. Find some other way to say it.
electroman1979 on NUMERO UNO by gorbichoff 13 Oct 2003, 7:46 PM
pretty good, write some more 10
SupremeDreamer on some deleted poem 13 Oct 2003, 8:24 PM
nice. did terrorists blow up the moon.. one day theyll do that too. 9.
kingit on werk by kingit 13 Oct 2003, 8:58 PM
you opine!- cute has it's merits
Hopefully your dad will correct your spelling. In your dreams that is. ;) - it's "c'est la vie" (to be pedagogical)
kingit on Vampires and sunblock 3000 by SupremeDreamer 13 Oct 2003, 9:25 PM
that's what's been happening to me...denial works better with paranoia
Freethinker1602 on some deleted poem 13 Oct 2003, 9:27 PM
Talent, talent. With these simple words, I praise you.8
*Lyrisick* on Night Terrors by princesszoe 13 Oct 2003, 10:54 PM
Wow! If i am impressed i am to the fullest!
abecedarian on Turncoat by poetandknowit 14 Oct 2003, 12:03 AM
Something fierce. And the single rhyme in this - fate/wait - well played, that bit. (I must confess to be ignorant of the background - saudi arabia? egypt?)
xxx on some deleted poem 14 Oct 2003, 2:11 AM
Great humor! I like your imponderables. Ya dun gud. (This ain't a suck up [blow down]. Has nothing to do with you marvelous work here) <Saw you message on my site. Thanks for the visit.>
xxx on some deleted poem 14 Oct 2003, 2:14 AM
This has got a lot. Angst, despair and hope said well.
xxx on some deleted poem 14 Oct 2003, 2:17 AM
You make me laugh! To me this is a very good thing. Your view is refreshing.