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Bachus on some deleted poem 13 Oct 2003, 1:59 PM
When I think of my own death, usually when I'm dealing with ignorant vultures like your neighbour, and all of the times I've died before this life. I know they were as slow and painful as a gut shot in the desert, as Jesus or Prometheus, and I always find myself proud and patient for its consumption over and over and over again, like the act of murdering or making love. And this sense of being and awareness is what seperates the REgal from the potato farmers, and what brings them together eventually as equals. However, my soul will not be coming back to this planet ever again, and I'm over it. Heaven, Hell, Life, Death, Love, all one and the same in the place of airless black forevers just outside the blue sky, just under the deepest ocean currents. The womb sits below the heart so that the child might know this enough to wipe it's feet before coming back. It's just upon arriving 'again' that one realizes, with a pleasant surprise, that they'd never even really left.
Shuushin on Not On Your Nelly by Wobble McFly 13 Oct 2003, 2:02 PM
A nice start to. something.
kingit on thanksgiving by kingit 13 Oct 2003, 2:03 PM
10-4 sweet-stuff, I'm on IT
kingit on thanksgiving by kingit 13 Oct 2003, 2:05 PM
Jeez, I think you're right!--the ambiguities!
Shuushin on مصادر فلسطينية أن الاحتلال by Wobble McFly 13 Oct 2003, 2:05 PM
Somewhat understated, yet I enjoyed the subtext - this bit, "ألكسندر كالوجين، أكد فيدوفين على" is a fairly unusual usage, and I always like that kind of thing. Small nit: "الإسر" should be "سرالإسر"
god'swife on thanksgiving by kingit 13 Oct 2003, 2:09 PM
Now if you could somehow make more sense with "planets I can live"
god'swife on not quite myself by muted_screams 13 Oct 2003, 2:12 PM
you forget to explain
god'swife on standing on the dry weeds by silvertongueddevil 13 Oct 2003, 2:15 PM
Worth a good re-edit. You have some worthwhile style, but it's sullied with a kind of irresponsibilty. You settle forless than perfect. Also the last 2 lines must have some serious typos, the grammer is incomperhensible.
god'swife on sit place by kingit 13 Oct 2003, 2:17 PM
You're interesting. Do you ever perfom these?(they seem like performance)
Bill Z Bub on some deleted poem 13 Oct 2003, 2:49 PM
Well hello there!
Bill Z Bub on some deleted poem 13 Oct 2003, 2:51 PM
Love it.
kingit on sit place by kingit 13 Oct 2003, 3:20 PM
I need a gimmick-- like stabbing chicken or making creme brule, while doing the read
electroman1979 on some deleted poem 13 Oct 2003, 3:26 PM
good poem, liked it
kingit on Dancing on Glass by thepinkbunnyofdoom 13 Oct 2003, 3:26 PM
scintillating.!
electroman1979 on some deleted poem 13 Oct 2003, 3:29 PM
ha ha, fits me to a tee as well, 10
kingit on some deleted poem 13 Oct 2003, 3:29 PM
prey, prey, prey!
kingit on some deleted poem 13 Oct 2003, 3:42 PM
take responsibility- it IS your fawlt-fawlt.4
kingit on thematic by FreeFormFixation 13 Oct 2003, 3:45 PM
I know how ya feel!
kingit on مصادر فلسطينية أن الاحتلال by Wobble McFly 13 Oct 2003, 3:53 PM
where can I get a typer that does that?
Shuushin on some deleted poem 13 Oct 2003, 4:06 PM
This one has been through the mill a few times, now in its third revision. I've touched it so much it is now a part of me; difficult to see it objectively - I'm in need of more eyes. Many thanks.