INTRANSIT
on ocd by FreeFormFixation
4 Oct 2003, 3:40 PM
I think this is more serious than acne.
one day soon? why not now? i'm feeling a little left out. i haven't recieved my weekly beating in some time. quite woe-some am i.
i love lime... good job!! I avoided this poem the title reminded me of some fairyland forest thing but I read it and now I feel much better.
... your wifes vagina has its own map?
thats really bad.
... i risked falling asleep when reading this.
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Sometimes I wish
every sky could be like this
on this perfect day
Hot, warm, humid,
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hot.. warm.. ? which is it!?
elmo discusses differemt types of heat kids!
no offense..
snore.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
4 Oct 2003, 6:06 PM
You know I stopped my fiance from smearing your name...now I'll do it over there! Thius site is childish and the owner is a moron. Ciao
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
4 Oct 2003, 6:10 PM
Some guy harrasses me and the owner does this? I'd suggest all women get off this site before they degrade you and harrass you too. Most of you have my email. Write me. If we all stick together, my uncle can have this site removed for good. I'm an editor for a zine etc and I'm going to make sure everyone knows what a sorry site this is!
poetandknowit
on Some follow marchers- others take time to understand it. by SupremeDreamer
4 Oct 2003, 7:37 PM
Lovely. And such original thinking.
Good morning.
"West of Switzerland" would work better
1,2,6,and7 are the shiz.
From that perspective? I bet.
Improves dramatically towards the end, but starts beached whale. 7.
I honestly can't vote on this. Morning to you to. I have to laugh. You certainly don't mince words here. I am more of a noon or early afternoon person. I change my mind.
This one word is great. It blanks my mind. It makes me hesitate.. It allows no room or not much room for misunderstanding. Yet I am positive I have not got it correct. Have a ten for the guts to do it!
Ten.
For that whole poemranker experience.
Don't leave us, dear Angel of Italy!
Bella! Wait! You were on the cusp!
Drink it down
and bite the rim
with salted tongue.
your brain will whistle
as the clouds spin away.
On the other hand, this IS the drunkards back alley of internet poetry.
The first rule of the dead poet society fight club, don't talk about the dead poet society fight club.
Second rule of dead poet society fight club, suck the fucking marrow out of life. And don't involve the
damn law.
(horus8 is, in reality, the orangutang from "Every which way but loose". Poet and Know It is a
pre-menopause Clint Eastwood.
Together, they fight crime!
That makes no fucking sense.
Its obvious I'm in need of brainsleep and have had quite enough Duckstein.
Good night all you marble-veined seraphim!
Sleep easy all you formulaic hippopotami
Whose IP is that? It belongs to at least 4 users:
Edible Underpants
King Abdulla I
King Abdulla II
Vampiros Lesbos
But I don't think it is Settle because it is a London based IP address. You've probably had this conversation loads of times before, and I'm probably being a doddery old fool who couldn't even "get with the times" if "the times" had accidentally broken both its legs in a freak bludgeoning accident, but do you know who it is?
The h in haiku is not silent, so it would a "a haiku." How am I supposed to know who Aida is?
cherry popper
drink deep the pink wine
of them shiverin cream thighs.
What's going through your mind when you decide to put a line break in?
im not sure, but i think #1 might be me first haiku..