Bachus
on Conform by oldschool
26 Sep 2003, 12:41 PM
Woe.
nice one.
Lovely, and true. Teen pregnancies skyrocket in June.
this is fun
FreeFormFixation
on Ginger Prawns prior to Sea world with Jeremy Irons by Bachus
26 Sep 2003, 11:23 AM
that's a lot of skin.
wordy.
i wont even begin an equal rights type of comment...
It's not every day you see a haiku with the word vstibular in it.
i give this extra points because it mentions smoking!
very pretty. i like the mollusk simile.
i like this poem. it makes me feel so detached, as i'm sure you must have felt observing such a tragic event.
Hahahaa ahhhh... Sluts.
Not concrete.
In the end it begins to show promise.
I loved how you confused star trek for starwars, and then later, them both, for Chud-Tron. lol
A couple of errors "No, more that a machine," than,
and there was another in there too. So here's a 9.
what about on the wall? under the table? ON THE FURNITURE!!!!
come to your senses, man!!!
where is the alcohol? this was all accomplished without a crutch?
In New South Whales we head shoot our palfrey and grow are own thyme shrubbers. 5 fur the tittle
This poem would be a perfect companion piece to the sound of a turd trying to pull itself back together the day after a relentlessly pounding rain storm.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
26 Sep 2003, 1:08 PM
If I were me I'd give me 100 percents for mere mention of a kleenex box.