this sucks. try again. no vote.

No. Where can I find such pictures?

I think it's very brave of you to post such an honest self-analysis. -9-

suck them vigorously right out of their shells. What's a week on the brink? What's tea time without chiarscurro Elvis peeping at you from over your plate.

Okay shit in two languages. impressivo beeftec y langosta Burrito escondido I'm going to log off and then give you a blue 0 for the spanish.

I don't hate all rhyming poetry.. here's proof. this poem. His Cobalt blue sigh bid me not cry.

I came back because I just realized what you need. what you really need. Remember you heard it here first.... L S D P e Y o T e M U sh R o o Ms do something to free yourself.. so that when you come back..if you come back...you can say something. my advice to you is FRY. please.

[_] AABBCC rhyming scheme [X] About romantic love [_] Arbitrary indentation [X] Arbitrary line breaks [_] Autobiographical but in the third person [_] Braggadocious [_] Clerical errors [_] Cliched rhymes (love/above etc.) [_] Cliched adolescent metaphors of darkness for despair etc. [X] Devoid of alliteration or any such linguistic embellishments [X] Devoid of rhyme [X] Devoid of simile, reification or any such literary devices [X] Devoid of wond'rous or fantastical imagery [X] Drug references [_] Elves [_] Exclamation points used to mark 'the funny bits' [_] Insipidly whimsical or zany [_] Leaving rant [_] Lower case only [_] 'Lyrics' [X] Melodramatic [_] Naively religious or superstitious [_] Obsessed with femininity [_] Overabundance of ellipses [_] Overuse of Latinate words and/or convoluted sentence structures [X] Pointedly unanswered questions [_] Protagonist has a smug name [_] Rage against the machine [_] References to the author's 'social life' [_] Repetition of a single word or phrase to the point of nausea [_] Sanctimoniously moral [X] Sappy [X] Suicide-related [_] Wish fulfilment -10-

Excellent. Without a doubt, ?-Dave_Mysterious-? is very amusing. My confusion arises from the fact that our Dave does not have the air of a newbie. He seems very sure of himself, and acts as though he knows the character traits of the existing users. Either he has been observing quietly from the sidelines for a long time, or he is an existing member with a new username. Certain similarities with -=Dark_Angel=- but no clear indication that they are one and the same person. Besides which, they have very different obsessions.

This poem makes me believe the exact opposite about you. That you have never been hit by a man..That you ARE a young boy trying to sound like an abused woman. If it's not the case than lose yourself in my loving embrace.

Sometimes whipping yourself with your own pen can cure many diseases. lament and retrograde extra-large can of raid and lots of gatorade Terminator Verse, Judgement Day Bitch. 8.

[X] AABBCC rhyming scheme [_] About 'love' [_] Arbitrary indentation [_] Arbitrary line breaks [_] Autobiographical but in the third person [_] Braggadocious [_] Clerical errors [X] Cliched rhymes (love/above etc.) [_] Cliched adolescent metaphors of darkness for despair etc. [X] Devoid of alliteration or any such linguistic embellishments [_] Devoid of rhyme [X] Devoid of simile, reification or any such literary devices [X] Devoid of wond'rous or fantastical imagery [_] Drug references [_] Elves [_] Exclamation points used to mark 'the funny bits' [_] Insipidly whimsical or zany [_] Leaving rant [_] Lower case only [_] 'Lyrics' [X] Melodramatic [_] Naively religious or superstitious [_] Obsessed with femininity [_] Overabundance of ellipses [X] Overuse of Latinate words and/or convoluted sentence structures [_] Pointedly unanswered questions [_] Protagonist has a smug name [X] Rage against the machine [_] References to the author's 'social life' [X] Repetition of a single word or phrase to the point of nausea [_] Sanctimoniously moral [_] Sappy [_] Suicide-related [_] Wish fulfilment -10-

this is only worth revising becuase you didn't try to make it rhyme...(I'm the anti--rhyme ogre come to eat your liver). one liver spared.. but If you love me, love me . . . for you know God, and He will not lead you astray… ahh. Knowing God is not a formula for good loving. If you rework it.. I'll vote on it.

I have heard of, and have seen such a picture.. not pleasant. the repetition makes it seem like your starting to stammer, as if gripped by anxiety or nervouseness.. at first i thought it out of place, but then you mentioned that you lived in such a place, and it made sense.. was that the purpose? or was it simply done to give more force to emotion? (im all curiouse this morning) overall, 8

open up.. or shrivel inwards, become dry and cracked: a mummy waiting to turn to dust. my mother had the same kind of problem.. unable to express emotion. The woman never looked happy (unless it was a dinner party, she was an A+ actor.. not many had a fucking clue) blessed with eight.

[_] AABBCC rhyming scheme [_] About 'love' [_] Arbitrary indentation [X] Arbitrary line breaks [_] Autobiographical but in the third person [_] Braggadocious [X] Clerical errors [_] Cliched rhymes (love/above etc.) [_] Cliched adolescent metaphors of darkness for despair etc. [X] Devoid of alliteration or any such linguistic embellishments [X] Devoid of rhyme [_] Devoid of simile, reification or any such literary devices [X] Devoid of wond'rous or fantastical imagery [X] Drug references [_] Elves [_] Exclamation points used to mark 'the funny bits' [_] Insipidly whimsical or zany [_] Leaving rant [_] Lower case only [_] 'Lyrics' [X] Melodramatic [_] Naively religious or superstitious [_] Obsessed with femininity [_] Overabundance of ellipses [_] Overuse of Latinate words and/or convoluted sentence structures [_] Pointedly unanswered questions [_] Protagonist has a smug name [_] Rage against the machine [_] References to the author's 'social life' [_] Repetition of a single word or phrase to the point of nausea [_] Sanctimoniously moral [X] Sappy [X] Suicide-related [_] Wish fulfilment -10-

Skewered through my circumcision Streamlined for for better barbecuing Weanie on mayo-paste.

bartering Emeralds with their dirty under nail teething mouths. straight through my brain..

El arrullo inocente de una lengüeta desconocedora calmante.

So true. So, so true.