some deleted user
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2003, 10:28 PM
Fabulous! 10.
yes
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2003, 10:32 PM
Nice use of imagery. 10.
If she gets you hard enough...once is enough.
The_Third_Isis
on Babelfish Poetry (IV): Hablaré en pensamientos (Español) by Geschäftsreise
17 Sep 2003, 10:33 PM
una rosa roja..ole.y castanetas.con confiansa y una copa de vino para brindar sus exitos.
bravo #3.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2003, 9:47 PM
just delete this poem and start again.
not one redeemable line in here. that's why nobody else is even willing to comment on it.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2003, 10:00 PM
crap. lines too long. too sorry not able to connect with this hopeless line...
I can not ever take wing? That sucks.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2003, 10:30 PM
Very clear point. 10.
The mushrooms on the north shore oahu will probably do the trick and also kill the tick.
The Third Isis
I smell a bbq...throw the witch on the barbie for a smoldering change..keep the broom for clean up.
The Third Isis
Syko baby come over for a massage ill make it all better..and read you astrologycal chart,maybe they are all wrong hmmm?
The Third Isis
I love poe..and excuse me theres that crow peking on my window..TSK.
The Third Isis
I feel this,,everytime i hit my ATM>Thanx for putting it into words.
The Third Isis
why wonder you are gifted.
The Third Isis
some deleted user
on Momma, don't let your pipebombs grow up to be Jewish by Bachus
17 Sep 2003, 8:12 PM
10 - jew laughing jew gassing tattoo notwithstanding mother reached for the stop cord but found only ashes from the burning bum hanging off her brow
One of your best. Tight, compact, significant. I'm proud of you.
If you lost the last line friend you would have a smoking gun, and I'd give you a ten instead of a nine.
Quickbread, and well versed. you've hit a fine vein of ore. 10.
sex with the tinman?
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2003, 9:28 PM
I'll use the stank last line as the first line of my next rant.