Me neither. You and "electroman1979" might have a disagreement to talk about- see "Judgment Day".

Fabulous...I love the descriptive language use here.

I guess.

God only knows everything because Santa Claus told her.

Perhaps this poem could be improved if it was set in space.

Cliche or not, I think that this poem is full of effective imagery as well as touching passion. As a woman, I can attest to the fact that we can indeed have fluid bodies, and I would be quite flattered to be described as such.

articulate, beautiful..."looking for clues in a book of long forgotten text"...i do the same every day...a deep, insightful piece, i like.9.

you think your cute huh? yeah, the poem long and all, but sadly off the mark, i guess we disagree on religion that is for sure, i'm not gonna rate this poem at all, but thanx for the offer of getting back at you

cute, Mr. Cheese, but "wasn't not not"? Was that to keep the rhythm, to confuse us with a triple negative, or a typo?

loved it, let's hear some more

good good, more more

Yes. That's the one I've seen and loved.

I see you're prepared. Since he will be coming in and out of your ass. Idiot. I would like to kick your fucking teeth in, earnestly, and shit down your gum hole, but you are to stupid to get the gist of who I am, so burn slow and timid with your vacant god.

"Her head now glued to the pages of a popular mystery novel." that was a nasty trick to play on her just because she fell asleep first.

a bum indeed..."i've seen what you look like under the stage paint"...that line was perfection

ah, so much in so words...concise,compact. Kind of slaps you around and pins you down, i like that

Nice work. I didn't like the "well" before "the one/ of our great grandfather"

my first thought was along the lines of 'yeah dude rock on for Christ' but i don't think that merely trying to be "good" will get you into heaven..there's no focus on forgiveness of sins...9.

its good, i like it

good poem, 10