?-Dave_Mysterious-?
on Why by J.B. Manning
5 Sep 2003, 3:51 PM
Powerful, moving, undulating, vertiginous.
Mostly Rubbish.
This poem is Skill
Your name however remains gay
Chutneybuttfuck
sensual!
You could not be more wrong.
I don't like this one.
I dig this, having just got off a plane a few days ago. Like "Recycle", I figure I'm probably missing something but, I'll give it another read soon.
dark and haunted. colourful use of language and yet accessible..
I think I got a contact high off of this. I probably misinterpreted it but it links well with my piece "Are You Experienced?" even the mistakes read like an acid trip...
pretty good
PS ignore SupremeDreamer it's better that way
Frisky, are we? Well we shall see. Until then i will concede. This is some of your finest. Atleast in the last nine months. Congratulations. I have to go to Tahoe for a spell, see you in a couple of days. 10.
lol, I like it. I really like it. hehe
The time of Christ was approximately 0BC to 30BC. I suggest you do some research in future.
liked it, what else do you got?
cute, though I think "dis" in the title is overkill. And peeved seems a rather... weak feeling, considering.
cute.
Neither... It died.
Are you the Pet Shop Boys?
This is good. While it has obviously offended some, no one can deny that it's a good poem. ^_^
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
5 Sep 2003, 3:25 PM
Lo ra