Not exactly as good as the other one I read of yours, but still, you have an original taste for style and words. Along with topic, I'm sure you imagine.

At least some parts of it made sense...I think.

Very good.

I have felt this way. Very nice work!

ok, that mouse/house rhyme was one bad way to end this.

good, i liked it, great imagination, breaks away from the routine poem :D

Enjoyed the tale- and you managed to make it poetic in spite of it being a good short story.

weep, why? for there is knives a plenty. 8.

I know you.. your the ghost of poetry past. 7

notice how you keep talking about the same things? widen your view, there is more in the universe than tears, you simply need to wipe them away and see.

Aww.. cmon now, you know i just do the meth to piss darkie off. Have a fun trip, and Happy Birthday!! :)

Starts of strong, but then does not deliver as well as it could.

Not bad at'all.

Very vivid imagery! Well done. :)

"Remembering how I was found lying there beneath her thin body mouthing a prayer behind the good couch and under the chair. Kissing her earlobes and under her chin, delicate heaven inevitable sin." An excellent read! I love the words you chose. :)

This is stunning work! You are very gifted.

you know, this is kinda fun. :) I like.

Top of the list for my unhairy hairyness, take that poetandknowit! But even the compliment isn't going to get you a 10 when you are saying goodbye, abecedarian.

Happy Birthday, and stay in touch.

From whimsey to horror. Excellent.