I didn't care much for the monologue/epilogue rhyming. Of all the poetry I ve read from you this one seems to be forced. Maybe it's just me?

"If Eve had tempted Adam With you - Instead of a paltry Apple... We would still be roaming Paradise" and smelling his bad breath... i think my plum idea is a better one.. ;/ blessed with 7.

Break away. . . Those chains that bind, They're only strong in your mind. Fulfill your fantasy, break away Someone better is sure to come your way.

ok ok, nice detail, nice twisted humor with the introduction of the wife.. but i still think its a failed poet glorifying his shame that resulted in suicide lol.. and how the fuck does he accomplish making an impact? i can imagine headlines: "Crazy Poet Slices Stomach To End His Hunger." that doesnt make an impact.. it makes parents scared when their child comes out of his/her room and says "i want to be a poet mommy and daddy!" in the morning right after they read the headline. "Be a lawyer honey" despite that, this poem deserves an 8 in my opinion, doesnt get a 9 because of the so called purpose of the poets bloody and painfull suicide.

Yes, indeed it is true, darkie, the man who once said he wished to uphold the good soul of the true gentleman, is no different than the ones who raped, the ones who shat themselves and blamed their butlers, and is the perfect image of the gentleman who is arrogant "as a gentleman should". Yes. He is a FRAUD. He is nothing, the least the jesus of the true and good code, but is descendant of the same "naughty" noble folk he claims to abhor. I mean business.. and i shall not be thrwarted, i am the one who shall speak of the rogues stone tablets which speak the truths of murder.. MURDER FUCKING MURDER. Horus, my time has come, give me my blade, and we shall kill a jew and eat his liver for my induction.

I spit. I pop. I rot. I cause thee to cry, and soon the fumes of my evil peeled layers shall kill thee. i smell someone who hides behind the moon, i smell a goon that wants to play a game i love.. or perhaps i smell blood that has not been spilled yet.. shall this veggie taste thy blood.. shall it flow as a large watercourse, or drain via the carved delta? -sniff- my teeth ache for flesh..

I am NOT a gentleman, i am a barbarian, who is engaged in a romantic obsession with his BattleAx. The love of blood is a holy practice, the sight of it dripping from the curved blade causes me to tremble in joy. A barbarian is true to nothing, but what he feels is right, he fights for his honor, and needs no social acceptance. To be accepted means nothing, for the honor of battle shall always be the only judge in the barbarians code. I am a killer. I am a man who knows the holy deed of murder. I am one who shall fight till the last man dies, and will not hesistate to run blindly against odds that spell his end. I am what it means to be free, to soar, i am the living dream of perfection through the brutal scripture of evolution. Amen.

Hmm. I'm not sure I'm convinced. Perhaps this is because it's not my favourite bit of the whole leadup to Ragnarok, possibly because I know so many wonderful prose versions of it that seeing it put into rhyme seems a little wrong, somehow. I dunno... it's not that's it's bad or anything, but it leaves me rather cold.

I suffer an extreme case of psychotic neurosis, obsessive in nature, accompanied with sadistic goals and a need to exterminate all traces of his adversary. Lengthy consideration of the patient brings me to conclude that there is little hope of helping him forgive his so-called enemy, which means we shall never be able to start healing his extreme insecurity. ---- yup, yup.. i can bullshit and play doctor too, but i still wouldnt tag myself one, because i have not studied to learn the craft of therapy. And I am not an egotistical shithead who needs to be labeled Dr. and not Detective. I also think his theory about me thinking detectives are inferior to doctors is his own feelings and not mine. My theory is that he desperately feels he is above the level of detective and must seek vengeance for being disgraced with what he considers the "lesser" of the two occupational titles. Yes, yes, theres much to consider.

Note to -=Dark_Angel=- Dear sir, Please do not respond to Y2kSlamPoete's latest flimsy post. It's blatantly obvious that he's a shameless liar. We all know he made the mistake of calling you "Detective" Watson as a result of his crippling ignorance. It is very obvious that he is attempting to cover up for his error by posting this rambling self-justificatory missive, the gist of which is that he *deliberately* called you "Detective" Watson because the word "Doctor" was singularly inappropriate for someone unqualified in medical matters. He's so transparent in his clumsy manoeuvring and so patently dim-witted in the execution of his designs that you are saved the task of pointing out his numerous glaring errors. Yours &c. Abdullah x x x x x

Well, now that the space is gone, it flashed light a big surprise into my face!! good! the effect is much better. Good work on the ascii drawing this time.. not as good as one of settles masterpieces, but its no longer "crappy". 8!

There is a thin line between imbecility and genius. But you're nowhere near it, just cast adrift on a sea of foolishness.

Interesting. Are the numerous grammatical errors an attempt at capturing the mindset of an inarticulate character, or can you just not type properly. I like the rousing ending.

I really like parts of this. I've never been to Ohio, but it sounds interesting. It's good to see people attempting social commentary, particularly in such an obtuse way. The second verse, which is more about the narrator, isn't as striking as the first.

A positive piece. Well spoken and a good message

Life is not so bad, with or without a map. And it may be hard but when they move on we must do the same.

-Think happy thoughts johnnie- can you get any cuter? 4

dont worry, im still not a christian, and am doomed to never be blessed with religion.

not good.. tsk. skimming the surface.. DRIVE THE KNIFE DEEP YOU STOMACHLESS WHORE...

I want to be there the next time you get together. I always liked redheads myself. Is she as cute as you?