DreamerSupreme
on Picasso by DreamerSupreme
27 Aug 2003, 6:46 PM
Now, i have dishonored your beloved picasso.. now you can defend him, now you can give me a zero and have a good excuse.. NOW YOU CAN! ok?
now all can wonder about good ole picasso.
It gets cliched at the end, but it starts off very strong and well balanced.
you were not circadian to begin with????
okay..well...uhm.
nice
I blame you
nice
over my head.
BEST POEM EVER.......sdfsdfsdffdssdffsdsdfdsffdsfd
Shelly is a girls name dude. 8.
I knew this guy in high school. Nice guy. One of the nicest, a good hippie in the suburbs. The guy wouldn't hurt a fly if it was spitting acid on his nuts. He bought a VW bus painted in splotches of every color, thrown on. Beautiful bus. The first day he had it burned to the ground in the school parking lot, taking with it everything he needed to graduate. That's Karma.
Maaaaan, you and them villanelles really know how to get it on!
Please be gentle, I'm all vulnerable in love.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
27 Aug 2003, 4:50 PM
1st stanza is really good. (7)
I liked it. (9)
ha ha brilliant. 9.
A precious observation of self. I would remove the date and end it like.
"in this junkyard of bodies, hoping for an end
to these means."
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
on My Show at the Whiskey a Go Go on the 26th of August 2003 by Jeremi B. Handrinos
27 Aug 2003, 1:56 PM
well?
I've done that lean.