Ilove you...

hrmm. your right, theres lots of profit in murder. ok bastage, ill write a murder poem.. heres a nine

i felt like i was reading a story when i read this, i'm not sure if that's good or bad. not big on the way it begins. it seems too jumpy and not in the good way.

nice build-up. i especially like "sweat so sweet that sour seems discreet". typo: steel, not steal, right? also: "Pain Sparks In my mind Lightly slightly Stimulates And separates Us from them" who is us and who is them? gay/straight? something else? maybe it doesn't need to be explained, because this is about the heat, and i'm not wearing my inflammable cat suit tonight. oh well.

What the hell? Am I on crack or something?

hrmm. Interesting. 8

hrmm.. an obsession with black oceans man?.. repetitive use of a word gets boring, fast. other than that, i liked it. blessed with 8

not a bad rant.. 8.

Lightly slightly - pick one and move on.. please dont repeat the same thing twice for a sing line.. its redundant.. Not a bad erotic write.. but i think you could revise this to a much better output.. up to you anyway. blessed with 8.

"Enter my world of unstructured poetry"

I believe the term was "perfect"

Uhhh...I think if he read this, he'd laugh in your puffy-eyed face! Nonetheless, this takes neurotic to another level. 6.

This poem is like Eva's cheesecake...the only good part is the crust (at the BOTTOM). You need to make your work more fluffy. Try messing around with the temperature.

Jermi has the same haircut as Pete Yorne! :D I'm already going to get a shit kicking anyway... but everybody does...

WHATEVER, There is NOTHING more important in life than hair. You are a sad, sad boy(girl?)thingy... Oh yeah, and Jermi has the same hair as Pete Yorn.

SUMMER POEM: The woman at the court asked me if my vegetables were fresh so I blew smoke at her and then I woke to found my fingertips wrinkled from the nectarine pit I was holding.

evil doers? tsk, i dont agree that we are evil doers, nor do i think folks fear speaking against the 8, i sure dont when i feel the need to. ;) Title sucks.. overall though it was well written, i think its the best poem written against poemranker that ive seen. that deserves a 10.

You forgot private, for-profit prisons (if you have money to invest in stock, and you don't care about what atrocities you are encouraging, this is the place to make some money) and the psychologists and social workers who evaluate the convicted murderers when the death penalty is in question. S'quite lucrative.

ice scream.. nice, i love that. 10.

Yes, I see.