horus8
on some deleted poem
18 Aug 2003, 1:08 PM
A whiff of the future.
Grody.
Juiced.
Yep.
this was a nice hard try but you should fly into your pantry and douse yourself with whatever clings to panties and nighties and is sealed in jars for anniversaries
fart. fart. 8.
In your efforts to be psychopathic, you are only homeopathic. I understand this, I relate, I also worry where your ass-hairs will crawl next.
Whenever I catch a cold, this big black snot falls out of my left nostril and curls in my lap like a muskrat would if it tried.
hostile,
you start off well enough, with a clip-cloppity rhythm and rhyme--but then somebody hobbled your horse.
also, can you show me a fresh treatment of this theme?
no vote yet.
If I had a stepladder I would climb and climb until I could not see this poem anymore, written on a condom package smuggled into Tijuana to rest on my wife's bosom for days and days while her body fessed up to her life.
wheres the ultra violence? lol. 9
You are dating a dieting Viking? Shall I compare you to a frightful-faced versifier? A pasty poetaster? MMM, tasty toes me taster.
please rank my kitty
her bum is full of air
I think your poems are sh---y
but I am rank with mant-tties
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
18 Aug 2003, 2:45 PM
This poem needs more poo on the sides and a dash of pee to mingle with the maudlin milkshake.
things stuck inside bum part 2
why is my bum
hanging there
and taking notes
bum says
i am not hanging here
taking notes
that is
your scrotum.
Ha Ha, I thought you were going to say because I'm "BBQin Manatees", Tom, that would have been a cackle aye? the pirates life and spackle for me, and a stinky cup of rumpee for a rupee. I gotz mesome RUbards.
Oh lordy someone gave me a zero. Darnit, that was poopy of them P{> (I am a pirate with an whitey powered eye patch) lol.
Speaking of baths... have you read my Sestina? He's right, he was over for dinner. With a Jew too, for that matter. Figures.
Poop
That was fun.