oh, god. i hate to encourage this sort of thing.

"my feet move with the littlest grace" I think littlest should be replaced with smallest or tiniest. Also, I believe the second line should say "where scars meet bone and fade" so that your verb and subject can agree. (Plus it will make your rhyme better).

Line 4- "meant" not ment Line 7- is Answers supposed to be capitalized (doesn't add much, if it is purposeful) Line 10- I think you mean "too"

Hey MnM, yo aint goin ta heaven that Whey...

ghosts do not have skin, other than that enjoyable enough, ending on a rhyming couplet is quite nice. Although again your 'prison of rage' belongs more in a pimple poem

A long way from a song lyric, but worth the trip there in edits.

Tony is a fascist. Shoot the horse man.

most of the first two verses are not needed. This works for me as the parable of a child alone. And your 'empty youth' sounds a little adolescent indulgent

Hey MnM, yo aint goin ta heaven that Whey...

A wordy explanation for the obvious.

God I must be slipping that took 5 mins to do and I'm welling up.

Hint: I sing, I sang, I have sung.

You forgot the category of poets whose primary themes are the world of poem ranker or their fellow poets on poemranker. By the way, only the RedSox (and WhiteSox) need change their sox.

Sir, my stories are to dust, what grease is... to dust. lol.

Attention: Britney (Pimple) by Ataryu I have not felt her angelic touch Which has to be so grace Nor the warmth of her lips Or her sweat embrace Didn't you copyright this sweat thing?

nice raw images, I like unharnessed elevator

RAGE, LOVE. FUCKING!!!! 10

god. i know the apostr. & punctuation thing. but i hate punctuations and caps. thanks

Until that day she did unfurl Why Nell had to stand up to pee.

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