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Shardik on Popularity by Ditchamal 5 Aug 2003, 12:45 PM
Neither, it's Stridex.
Ataryu on Palm Field Park by SupremeDreamer 5 Aug 2003, 3:28 PM
:'(
<~> on I An Anew (re edit) by scitz 5 Aug 2003, 12:24 PM
de HABilitated man.
richa on some deleted poem 5 Aug 2003, 12:50 PM
a kind of pass note poetry,
Shardik on Joe is Dead Now by Freethinker1602 5 Aug 2003, 11:56 AM
Seems like a cleaner edit.
rusty on Killing Ben Afleck by Shardik 5 Aug 2003, 2:33 PM
I needed to smile today
<{Baba^Yaga}> on some deleted poem 5 Aug 2003, 11:37 AM
Shitknee (crumple) by Batdiary I halved no feeled her anglic touche Witch haze too be so gracing Nor thy warming halved hair lipstinsteins Nordic her sweat embared ace. This pitcher I retained Beholds her fece so fair The flingings that I halved for her Is one I cun’t exploit One thing of heres is so supert No other butt her personallyty That it is ale I need to feel up her louver Not some dressinged up fucking china dolte
Your first statement is powerful, you need to have her with eyebrows and fourteen or twelve toes by the end, or you'll story will die, worthless. Once again your first line sets the pace, so deliver the goods that's what we're interested in. Why, How, who, where, we know when and who you are already, you mentioned ghost town so get there man.
eliastemplar on Fish by http://findingwater 5 Aug 2003, 12:08 PM
My brand of wierd. Smell ya later.
richa on some deleted poem 5 Aug 2003, 12:56 PM
a little self indulgent and trivial for a poem about drug addiction. Would it be offensive of me to suggest you are not an addict?
Shardik on Summer by MaliqaTara 5 Aug 2003, 1:52 PM
This is such a great poem.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on The Smell of Wolves by rusty 5 Aug 2003, 3:25 PM
No shit dude. I was raised by prawnes actually. Did you know the one thing a prawne fears most is an EXOSKELLINGTON?
rusty on Karma by http://mulberryfairy 5 Aug 2003, 2:25 PM
I love "frenzied victim" I had to read this poem a few time out loud because tounge hit teeth so nicely.
"His girlfriend left him for some guy who could drive," Quite possibly the funniest line imaginable. But if you destroy the Angel, I'll have nothing to do?
eliastemplar on nightly by <~> 5 Aug 2003, 12:01 PM
Idealy haiku should appeal to at least two of the five senses. It's something I don't do every time either.
<~> on Portsmouth belle 2 by Garrett S Sexton 5 Aug 2003, 12:22 PM
this is a lyric. and a damn fine one at that.
no eyebrows and a cameltoe sounds more interesting and diverse...haha...i just don't like how 13 sounds.
rusty on Ode to a Fox Cub by http://mulberryfairy 5 Aug 2003, 2:19 PM
what I enjoyed most was the vision of humanity and nature the questions and statements that were given. I very beautiful peice
Ataryu on some deleted poem 5 Aug 2003, 3:07 PM
That was beautiful Baba Yaga. It really touched me. Go Kurby! (>'o')>
<~> on some deleted poem 5 Aug 2003, 1:29 PM
there. now that's a succinct whole. nicely done.